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May-13-2024
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Balsams- POTD


In tastefully lined up pots in a row, Multi colored balsams in clusters grow. A visual treat to adoring eyes, But never a haunt frequented by bees. Balsams do not need much care, yet may fade, If not allowed a little shade. Flimsy they are of delicate stems, With light green leaves of serrated hems. Growing in my neatly laid up yard, They invariably make me glad. Gleaming in the first rays of summer sun, By their simple beauty, my heart they have won. Unlike the charming red, red rose Hardly any poet, on them, odes compose They have no scent, yet as a colorful throng, In my courtyard, proudly they belong When the flowers wither, pods appear In time for self- dissemination, prepare When fully ripe, the pods explode And seeds fly as birdies from their nest to explore! Thus, Nature’s ways are so amazing Even in plants there's an inherent training For seeds to leave the comfort of their pods And find their own space fighting all odds!
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M  Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Belated Congratulations sweet Valsa on POTD! Debx
George Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Dear Deb, thanks for your Congratulations. Saw this only now.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest too!
George Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Thanks a lot dear Kim.
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 5:27 AM
Hello Valsa :-) Great poem! Balsam is very curative!
George Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Thanks a lot dear Abdullah... So sorry for the late response. Saw this now only.
Kauffman Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 11:05 AM
Back with congratulations, dear Valsa! Indeed "nature's ways are so amazing" and your poem leaves that feeling of amazement and wonder with me. Sending you blessings and hugs, dear friend!
George Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 8:15 PM
Thanks a lot dear Sam for your kind words of encouragement. Sending you love and blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 9:45 AM
Congratulation on your new win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Balsams" write again. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
George Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 8:11 PM
Thank you so much dear Paula for your second visit and congratulations.
Narain Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Thanks for listing your nice poem in my sponsored contest. Congratulations. Great to have POTD honor.
George Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 8:10 PM
It has been my pleasure taking part in your contest. Thanks for the placement given. Also thanks for your Congratulations.
One Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 11:58 AM
A wonderful choice for POTD...Congratulations
George Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 8:09 PM
Thank you so much dear Silent One.
Rolland Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 11:28 PM
wonderful poem, and flower one of my favorites, this flower is quite inpiring, even when there is no perfume, it miss me a lot, thanks Poet
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 5:13 AM
Yaan, thanks a lot for your frequent visits to my page and your kind comments.
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 11:28 PM
Beautifully penned Valsa, Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Thanks a lot dear Jan.... limerick queen.
Nicole Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 7:38 PM
Dear Valsa, many do compose poems about the elegant rose. So wonderful reading about this delicate, delightful flower. The images you paint leave me in complete awe. You've created a masterpiece with your words, and I can see why this colorful cluster has won your heart. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Brandy, you always find time to congratulate all who get the POTD status. Your comments are always analytical and elaborate and a pleasure to read. When I had more time I used to say a word of Congratulations on POTDs. Now sadly I don't have time even for that. Thanks a lot sweet friend for your great comment and your acknowledgement of what Tom has said.
Bartley Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Very nice poem about Balsams. I feel as though I'm there now, experiencing something I've missed. Thanks for the realization.
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Thanks a lot dear Benjamin for your highly encouraging comment and congratulations.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Dearest Valsa, I am so delighted to find your captivating poem on this page! Congratulations on receiving honour of POTD. The images and vivid descriptions are so creative, I fall in love with your stunning garden. Hope you will write many more brilliant poems inspired by your love of Nature. Love and Hugs ~
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:59 AM
Mala, I always feel that our interests are similar..... love of nature and art and painting. Thank you dear one for your words of appreciation.
Kauffman Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Dearest Valsa, what a beautiful poem highlighting the exquisite Balsams with "serrated hems!" Your poetic language is artistry on the loose - boundless in fresh imagery and expression! Your poems always make me smile with your creativity and originality! You truly think poetically! What a joy you are my friend! Blessings as you spread the seeds of poetry like the balsams spread their wonder! Congratulations on your POTD. I am so happy for you to receive this honor!
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Sam, when I get such comments from a talented poetess like you I feel greatly humbled. I know my poems have just an average level. When you appreciate my poems to this extent, what I find is the largesse of your mind. Thanks a lot dear gifted friend.
Bowring Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Dear Valsa, many congratulations for POTD with this delightful read. So beautifully written with wonderful flow and rhyme. Love the imagery that you have artistically created,’ Gleaming in the first rays of summer sun’ ‘ when fully ripe, the pods explode’ Your garden must be a lovely haven to enjoy. Really enjoyed this tranquil poem. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and blessings xx
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Hi Christina, So happy for your sweet comment. I do love flowers and enjoy gardening, though I cannot boast of a wonderful garden. I am too busy these days. Sorry for the late response.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 10:49 AM
So pretty… Balsams In tastefully lined up pots in a row, Multi colored balsams in clusters grow...Congrats on POTD, Valsa!
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:48 AM
Hi Kim, thanks a lot. Sorry for my late response.
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Valsa! Captivating is the imagery of a beautiful garden on display, so much to learn from the balsam. You are too kind to compose an ode for them! Enjoy your day-blessings for your garden & hugs to you~Anaya
Anaya Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 11:09 AM
No worries, stay busy...a long life depends on it! ;) Anaya p.s. you sound today like my older sister! lol
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:47 AM
Hi Ayana, let me repeat once again that i don't get time to look at the poems of you and many others as I am held up with many responsibilities. Thank you so much for your kind and sweet words
McBride  Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, indeed God's creation is seen all around us, when we seek : )
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Stephan, thank you so much. Yes, God's beautiful creations are all around us.
Rodgers Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Good Morning, Valsa; I am back to give you a super high five for your outstanding poem getting POTD. - Blessings, and Hugs! - Daniel
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Hi Daniel, I couldn't even respond to your previous comment as i was too held up. Soon I will look at your poem. Thanks a lot dear friend for your second visit.
Baker Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Beautiful poem with a life lesson within. Congratulations on your fine POTD, Valsa! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:40 AM
Hi Bill, It is long since I have commented on your poems. Now my responsibilities at home compel me to respond only to those who comment on my poems because of lack of time. Please excuse me. Thanks a lot for your congratulations.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Balsams" is a lovely write. Have a wonderful day with your win...................
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:34 AM
Hi dear Paula. Thanks a lot for your Congratulations. Sorry for the late response
May Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 5:44 AM
Wonderful write about Balsams, Valsa, Congrats on POTD
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:33 AM
Joseph, thanks a lot dear friend. I shall look at your poems soon.
Gentile Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 4:48 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your POTD honors for your lovely poetic portrait of Balsam! Enjoy your day xxoo
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:31 AM
Hi Mike, thanks a lot. Being out of home, I couldn't respond immediately.
Jones Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 4:13 AM
A lovely informative potd! Congratulations Valsa!
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:30 AM
Thank you so much dear Karen. I shall be back to your poems when I am free.
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Valsa, love your balsam poem, congratulations on POTD.
George Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Thanks a lot dear Tania. Please excuse my late response. I have been busy
Elliott Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 3:05 AM
Lovely POTD, Congratulations! Enjoy your special poetry day. :)
George Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 3:12 AM
Hi Regina, thanks a lot for your kind words.
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