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08/05/23

Put yourself in their shoes

 

Contest by Eve Roper.

BALING HAY We three are farmer girls primarily. named as Alice, Linda and Emily. belonging to same peasant family of almost same age holding simile. All of us work hard in field merrily. We hold skill to cut, chop and collect hay. We are performing throughout the whole day. Working under open sky and Sun rays. Enjoying work staying cheerful and gay. Panorama touching horizon gray. Linda standing as her bundle is done. Emily holds bunch on shoulder in fun. Me Alice, baling to finish my turn. Since childhood ' Baling hay', we are to learn. Farmhouse close by: At eve, we rush, run. We are close friends, being cousin sisters. Not rock STAR but shine as Bailing Hay STAR. Expert to bind bunch of hay in cluster. We do job fast, yet try to do faster. We enjoy festive days during Easter.

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Date: 8/28/2023 10:48:00 PM
A beautiful rhyme on the three little girls. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/28/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for your creative poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win. Eve
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Date: 8/28/2023 6:31:00 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your win, which is truly deserved, as your poem is a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty.
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Date: 8/3/2023 10:45:00 PM
Short and sweet. It's a lovely poem.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/4/2023 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette. Blessings.

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