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Baker's Senryu

pillsbury dough boy tap dances cinnamon rolls rise Heidi Sands 10/10/18 Placed 2rd in the Baker's Dozen Contest. Syllables required - 5-3-5

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2018 8:45:00 AM

I enjoyed your creative take on this bread theme, Heidi! Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/16/2018 10:11:00 AM

Thank you Paul. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Roy Pett

Date: 10/14/2018 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Heidi, I think this is an amazing Senryu, really enjoyed. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2018 2:38:00 PM

Thank you Roy. I appreciate your kind comment and support. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/14/2018 10:55:00 AM

Congrats!!! Heidi...I missed this one...should have placed higher...love & dough...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2018 11:51:00 AM

Thanks WW! It was fun lol. Love and dough! :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/14/2018 10:49:00 AM

I love this one..Congrats on your win Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2018 11:50:00 AM

Thanks. Joseph. I am happy you love this one. It was fun lol :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2018 10:41:00 AM

I do use them quite often, but the holidays or when I am hungry for rolls I take my bread maker down form the cabinet.. but I did use to do it the old fashion way.. to much work on the arms and hands ...congratulations on your win

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2018 10:46:00 AM

You sound like you are good at baking Eve! Thank you :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/11/2018 3:09:00 PM

Oh, I've always had a crush on that dough boy, always an urge to poke his cute tummy-tum. All I've read tonight featuring bread has me craving soft butter and a thick slice from bread's end. So, that means, to me, you just now won as your words threw me from 'sounds good' to 'must have.' Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/11/2018 3:11:00 PM

Thank you so much CayCay. That is kind of you to say. I actually, wanted some after writing it myself lol. I appreciate your comment. Poetry hugs. :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/11/2018 11:28:00 AM

Sweet, You mentioned all of my favorites in 3 lines, I'll bring the tea, Yum, . thanks Heidi, for heightening my taste buds today, now I hope its a winner for you Have a great day.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/11/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thanks Pixie. Let's enjoy some. Come on over. Tea sounds good too ! :)