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Bait

Better to shun the bait than struggle in the snare Or else devour at leisure whilst you're there Feast as death approaches, close eyes, be unaware If baited is your fate perhaps embrace the lair Oh so very tempting is your last ever feast To get it sometimes we'll draw out our inner beast Salvation looks like the place we like the least Repentance ain't easy, when you are deceased Commit to one or other, don't settle for being torn Life you live v the life you want, perpetually mourn Whatever path you take it'll garner someone's scorn Is living really living if guaranteed each dawn? The unbaited prey desires the predator's power Observing all those innocents, hour after hour It's no life for anyone to live in fear and cower So we find ourselves again salivating as we devour

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Date: 3/30/2024 3:37:00 PM
Just so much said in this poem- "Is living really living if guaranteed each dawn"- really deep thinking...
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Date: 3/30/2024 4:05:00 PM
Thanks Paige, I've not checked out the other poems for this prompt but hoped to go in a different direction, plus it was fun to ponder x
Date: 3/29/2024 8:56:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem. Bait or temptation, each has severe consequences.
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Date: 3/30/2024 12:06:00 AM
True Hilda, it has to be tasty to work
Date: 3/29/2024 7:04:00 PM
hey it's fishing season and this one bets it all.....hook, line and stinker.....er...umm..sinker...Quite a deep pond you invited us into DD
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Date: 3/30/2024 12:05:00 AM
It's a contest write, I'm still as pure as the driven snow :)

Book: Shattered Sighs