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Bait!

Bait! You are a fish I am your bait come find me now and write our fate Forever open is not the gate so, come catch me now before it's too late!

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Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/6/2009 10:42:00 AM

Awesome! This has so much meaning to me! Wonderful write!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/17/2009 3:03:00 PM

Wonderful write my friend. I love the last line in the first stanza and the rest of the poem just flow very smoothly. I hope you get caught before its too late. Much love my fellow caribbean/South American friend.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/17/2009 1:21:00 PM

Great write, Maryam! Love the lines "come find me now and write our fate" but it is all wonderful. I like reading your writes too! Glad to see you posting so many. Keep writing! Love, Robin

Michaela Payne

Date: 1/17/2009 10:52:00 AM

Great write, I really liked the idea of this. Wonderful job! Blessings, ~Michaela~

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/17/2009 9:36:00 AM

Along time ago, this poem wasnt meant to be asked why? smile] only something I look back on. Today I would never do this. Grown man.