Bait!

Bait!


You are a fish
I am your bait
come find me now
and write our fate

Forever open 
is not the gate
so, come catch me now
before it's too late!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 6, 2009 at 10:42 AM
Awesome! This has so much meaning to me! Wonderful write!
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January 17, 2009 at 3:03 PM
Wonderful write my friend. I love the last line in the first stanza and the rest of the poem just flow very smoothly. I hope you get caught before its too late. Much love my fellow caribbean/South American friend.
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January 17, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Great write, Maryam! Love the lines "come find me now and write our fate" but it is all wonderful. I like reading your writes too! Glad to see you posting so many. Keep writing! Love, Robin
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January 17, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Great write, I really liked the idea of this. Wonderful job! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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January 17, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Along time ago, this poem wasnt meant to be asked why? smile] only something I look back on. Today I would never do this. Grown man.
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