Edwin Hofert Poet Rhyme

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Badder Day

Badder Day

I woke up this morning
so cold I'm almost jerking.
My house was almost freezing
my furnace wasn't working.

I stepped outside to take a ride
and stopped where I was at.
All four of my truck tires
and my spare was flat.

I fired up my motor
in my truck parked in the street.
And relished in the moment
as I started feeling heat.

Pulling off my jacket
when the next thing that I knew.
Steam was going everywhere
my heater hose just blew.

I could not believe my luck
I couldn't get it through my head.
I tried to call my mother
but my cell phone had gone dead.

Then I turned in time to see
this poor girl with her dad.
I suddenly felt better
my day don't look so bad.

Edwin C Hofert

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Kp Nunez May 7, 2015 at 9:03 PM JUST what do you mean by that? lol! I knew where this was going...! Thanks for the laugh! It's now evening there, right? Your day must have improved then. :) Edwin Hofert May 8, 2015 at 9:46 AM LOL Some pictures are worth a thousand words. I think this picture was one of those lol. Hugs

Judy Konos May 7, 2015 at 5:38 PM After all that!! And This and That! I didn't think they made anybody that poor! Whew Edwin Hofert May 8, 2015 at 9:47 AM LOL If you ain't the lead dog the view never changes lol. The poor girl.

Jan Allison May 7, 2015 at 2:02 AM ha ha ha and the picture says everything! Hugs Jan xx Edwin Hofert May 8, 2015 at 9:48 AM I could not agree more! LOL