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Badder Day I woke up this morning so cold I'm almost jerking. My house was almost freezing my furnace wasn't working. I stepped outside to take a ride and stopped where I was at. All four of my truck tires and my spare was flat. I fired up my motor in my truck parked in the street. And relished in the moment as I started feeling heat. Pulling off my jacket when the next thing that I knew. Steam was going everywhere my heater hose just blew. I could not believe my luck I couldn't get it through my head. I tried to call my mother but my cell phone had gone dead. Then I turned in time to see this poor girl with her dad. I suddenly felt better my day don't look so bad. Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/7/2015 9:03:00 PM
JUST what do you mean by that? lol! I knew where this was going...! Thanks for the laugh! It's now evening there, right? Your day must have improved then. :)
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/8/2015 9:46:00 AM
LOL Some pictures are worth a thousand words. I think this picture was one of those lol. Hugs
Date: 5/7/2015 5:38:00 PM
After all that!! And This and That! I didn't think they made anybody that poor! Whew
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/8/2015 9:47:00 AM
LOL If you ain't the lead dog the view never changes lol. The poor girl.
Date: 5/7/2015 2:02:00 AM
ha ha ha and the picture says everything! Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/8/2015 9:48:00 AM
I could not agree more! LOL

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