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Bad Timing Footles

Blind date I’m late Miss bus I cuss Get next She text Goodbye I cry Go home Alone 22nd August 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:16:00 PM

haha. Way to go, Jan. we made it on this list but not so good on next one. Congrats!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2016 7:19:00 PM

This will be my one and only win lol my N/A list is now so long I could use it as toilet paper for a year lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/30/2016 11:43:00 PM

Congrats Jan. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2016 7:18:00 PM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 9/30/2016 1:18:00 PM

Jan a big CONGRATULATIONS to my little funny poet~

Lu Loo

Date: 9/30/2016 12:58:00 PM

cutely written :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2016 7:18:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2016 8:11:00 AM

way to GOOOOOO. Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2016 7:18:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/30/2016 1:22:00 AM

Great footles, Jan:) congratulations on your win:)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2016 2:01:00 AM

Thanks Jo I love this clever little form and have written many poems of this style:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/22/2014 5:22:00 PM

You rock these oh great and powerful queen of footles

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2014 5:31:00 PM

LOL Casarah I think Tim is a King of footles but he is too shy to post them but just makes me giggle:-( J+Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2014 5:15:00 PM

.... everything went wrong.... - well done, Jan ! :) ! - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2014 5:30:00 PM

LOL Anne Lise guess it did:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/22/2014 5:00:00 PM

locked loo....can't poo... hate work....boss jerk...miss day....no pay.....bed bugs...no hugs.....lol..hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2014 5:03:00 PM

LOL am loving it when you reply Tim - awesome especially first one you need to post these my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx