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Poor old Dan was a bit of a schmuck Ran out of gas in his brand new truck Now late for his date Boy, was she irate No hanky panky was his bad luck hanky panky- loosely translated as sexual activity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 7/9/2014 9:03:00 PM
aww bless his heart. lol.. congrats on a great win, Barbara.. hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/8/2014 11:44:00 PM
Barbara, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/8/2014 4:24:00 AM
Enjoyed the wit, congrats!
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Date: 7/7/2014 4:09:00 PM
a very cute one you penned! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/7/2014 6:48:00 AM
Great limerick ,, poor guy ! Congrats on big win Barbara!
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Date: 7/7/2014 6:22:00 AM
Very light pleasing humor, Barbara. congrats on the win
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Date: 7/6/2014 6:07:00 PM
Maybe he will have to "pick-up" a new girl in his pickup truck !! LOL !!! Good one!!!
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:56:00 PM
very witty a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:35:00 PM
Very witty, Barbara! Still hear hanky panky being used around, but then my wife is English! congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 6/20/2014 10:52:00 PM
hahaha, GOOD ONE
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Date: 6/19/2014 3:08:00 PM
:D Got a great laugh out of your limerick, BG. There's a bar down the road called "Hanky Panky." I'm sure Roy will know what you mean. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/19/2014 3:11:00 PM
Thanks LNC...Not sure where I came up with that phrase..dont hear it much any more.
Date: 6/18/2014 4:44:00 PM
Hahaha....humorous but true....hugs Tim
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