Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

Bad Luck

Poor old Dan was a bit of a schmuck
Ran out of gas in his brand new truck
Now late for his date
Boy, was she irate
No hanky panky was his bad luck



hanky panky- loosely translated as sexual activity

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Arlene Smith July 9, 2014 at 9:03 PM aww bless his heart. lol.. congrats on a great win, Barbara.. hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2014 at 11:44 PM Barbara, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 8, 2014 at 4:24 AM Enjoyed the wit, congrats!

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2014 at 4:09 PM a very cute one you penned! Congrats for your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 7, 2014 at 6:48 AM Great limerick ,, poor guy ! Congrats on big win Barbara!

Dr.Ram Mehta July 7, 2014 at 6:22 AM Very light pleasing humor, Barbara. congrats on the win

Carrie Richards July 6, 2014 at 6:07 PM Maybe he will have to "pick-up" a new girl in his pickup truck !! LOL !!! Good one!!!

Jan Allison July 6, 2014 at 4:56 PM very witty a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus July 6, 2014 at 4:35 PM Very witty, Barbara! Still hear hanky panky being used around, but then my wife is English! congrats on your win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2014 at 10:52 PM hahaha, GOOD ONE

Carolyn Devonshire June 19, 2014 at 3:08 PM :D Got a great laugh out of your limerick, BG. There's a bar down the road called "Hanky Panky." I'm sure Roy will know what you mean. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn Barbara Gorelick June 19, 2014 at 3:11 PM Thanks LNC...Not sure where I came up with that phrase..dont hear it much any more.

Tim Smith June 18, 2014 at 4:44 PM Hahaha....humorous but true....hugs Tim