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Bad Luck

Poor old Dan was a bit of a schmuck Ran out of gas in his brand new truck Now late for his date Boy, was she irate No hanky panky was his bad luck hanky panky- loosely translated as sexual activity

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Arlene Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 9:03:00 PM

aww bless his heart. lol.. congrats on a great win, Barbara.. hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:44:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 7/8/2014 4:24:00 AM

Enjoyed the wit, congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2014 4:09:00 PM

a very cute one you penned! Congrats for your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/7/2014 6:48:00 AM

Great limerick ,, poor guy ! Congrats on big win Barbara!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/7/2014 6:22:00 AM

Very light pleasing humor, Barbara. congrats on the win

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2014 6:07:00 PM

Maybe he will have to "pick-up" a new girl in his pickup truck !! LOL !!! Good one!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2014 4:56:00 PM

very witty a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2014 4:35:00 PM

Very witty, Barbara! Still hear hanky panky being used around, but then my wife is English! congrats on your win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 10:52:00 PM

hahaha, GOOD ONE

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2014 3:08:00 PM

:D Got a great laugh out of your limerick, BG. There's a bar down the road called "Hanky Panky." I'm sure Roy will know what you mean. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/19/2014 3:11:00 PM

Thanks LNC...Not sure where I came up with that phrase..dont hear it much any more.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/18/2014 4:44:00 PM

Hahaha....humorous but true....hugs Tim