Bad Ghoulish Goblin

There once was a bad ghoulish goblin.
Thump, thump on a crutch he was hobblin’.
It was Halloween night.
He dared to give a fright.
But he fell to the ground; he was wobblin’.

© November 4, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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November 26, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Made me chuckle with this one Dane Ann, many congrats on your win > have a lovely weekend >> James
Roberts Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 11:10 AM
cute one , congrats on your win in the contest
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November 25, 2010 at 4:15 AM
haha another great comical one with a nice beat. So many wonderful ones in this contest. congratulations, Dane Ann
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November 25, 2010 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
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November 24, 2010 at 9:15 PM
Are you sure it wasn't the pirate that was wobblin' on his crutch, Dane? Funny write and congrats on the win. Dan C
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:59 PM
Dane....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Sweetheart Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:09 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick luv.. enjoy another big win tonight my friend..
Johnson Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 4:39 PM
Great win Dane Anne. Congratlations. Love, Joyce
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November 24, 2010 at 2:47 PM
For some reason I keep seeing you as this goblin, Dane Ann. A funny poem, dear. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
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November 24, 2010 at 2:02 PM
haha, this was sure cute, Dane Ann. Congratulations. I Hope you are ready for Thanksgiving tomorrow.Luv, Anrea
Freeman Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your "Ghoulish Goblin's third place, happy thanksgiving, Dane. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 6:08 AM
LOL Guess you know a bit about hobblin' and wobblin', my friend. You gave us a great laugh with your limerick and I hope you'll enter it in John Freeman's contest. I see you wrote something on elections so I didn't read it in hope you will enter it in my contest. It's great to see you posting again, Dear Dane Ann! Love, Carolyn
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