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Bad Date Night

Up late
Blind date

Old car
Sub par

We ate
Rare steak

He had
Bad gas

His pad
So sad

No clue
So blue

I need
To leave

Back home
Don't phone




Written on 3/29/2015

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Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 2:19 PM

Laura, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA

Sara Kendrick

April 17, 2015 at 1:16 PM

Great footles..Not so easy to write but you have done well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

James Fraser

April 13, 2015 at 4:00 PM

Nice one, and congrats on it being recognised in the contest, smiles, James :)

Laura Leiser

April 13, 2015 at 5:54 PM

Thank you, James! :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2015 at 10:44 PM

LOVE THIS. Congrats for your win.

Laura Leiser

April 12, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Jan Allison

April 7, 2015 at 11:43 AM

made me giggle a second time - dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) Hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser

April 12, 2015 at 5:31 PM

Thank you, Jan! :)

Viv Wigley

April 6, 2015 at 1:43 AM

I honestly can't remember going on that date with you, Laura, forgive me :) . Fun footle, #7, great first attempt. Viv

Laura Leiser

April 12, 2015 at 5:31 PM

HahaaaAA :) Good one, Viv! It was a fun write!

Dorian Petersen Potter

March 30, 2015 at 8:14 PM

Excellent pen Laura! Full of good humor and fun I truly enjoyed your footle, very nice piece,dear friend.A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely day!In God I trust !In his light! God bless you!:)D.

Laura Leiser

April 12, 2015 at 5:32 PM

Thanks very much, Dorian :) Blessings to you, too!