Michael J. Falotico Poet Light Verse

"bad Adam"

Sitting by my window watching all the temptations..
Every Eve passing through my garden is a sensation..
Each carrying an apple with one sweeter than the other..
Shall I slide from my seat and indulge in another?..
Or shall I lay dormant and pray for one warmer...
A flurry pours through my body like the heat of summer..
I reach out from my chair and pluck this tasty gift...
Our lips meet as the apple juices run down to our hips..
I'm blinded by this beauty, control and judgment lost..
But my desire so strong, I must have her at any cost...
The passion diminishes as I lay in the grass, 
I'm drained of all my senses as I ponder what just passed..

speaking to the "rambling poet"

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James Fraser June 1, 2010 at 1:36 PM Michael, many congratulations on your fine win in Linda-Marie's Adam contest >> James

Dr.Ram Mehta May 31, 2010 at 5:23 PM Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2010 at 4:48 PM Congrats Michael on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Constance La France May 30, 2010 at 6:43 AM Dear Bad Adam(Michael). Of course, I had to rate this a seven. It is tops for me. I am totally honoured to have it dedicated to me. My poem for the contest, is a good match for this one, as it is also, very sensual, and passionate. Perhaps my poem is the dream, and yours is the reality. Best of luck to both of us, in the contest. By the way, mine is dedicated to you, now, also. Constance

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2010 at 5:50 PM hmmm, and Constance has not even read this yet???

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2010 at 5:49 PM wow, so far I have counted two Adams going after Constance. And none of the other Eve's are even in the race. haha. Good one! LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown May 26, 2010 at 10:13 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Michael. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A May 26, 2010 at 8:28 AM yes bad ADAM, glad i am no Adam, lol, this was smooth and so true, poor Eve's passing by. Wonderful job, and good luck,..p.d.

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson May 26, 2010 at 8:03 AM Very visual poem. Thanks for sharing. Hope you have a great day! Scarlett

Dr.Ram Mehta May 25, 2010 at 7:35 PM I lay dormant and pray for the warmer, nice expression. I enjoyed this passionate poem of bad Adam

Debbie Guzzi May 25, 2010 at 2:18 PM Oouuuuu Lala....a bunch of impregnated women? LOL Light & Love

Sean Kelly May 25, 2010 at 11:20 AM Well presented , Michael and best of luck in this unique contest . As God said to The HolyGhost , as they watched ; " It's not the apple on the tree , I'm worried about . It's the "pear " on thr ground !!!! ....