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hor d’oeuvres alongside wading pool in woodsy yard — mosquitoes backflip 9/4/2020

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Date: 9/6/2020 6:48:00 AM
They love the water - and hors d’oeuvres as well. Quite the attraction for the little blood-thirsty buggers. Your imagery is great Kim! Linda
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Date: 9/4/2020 5:45:00 PM
ohhh, those insects are having a feast.. wonderful senryu, kim...huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2020 5:50:00 PM
Yes, they are! Thanks!
Date: 9/4/2020 5:22:00 PM
Ahhhh. So pretty. Loved that last line!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2020 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 9/4/2020 2:57:00 PM
Great one Kim PR
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie! :)
Date: 9/4/2020 2:53:00 PM
hahaha. this is SO inventive. So cute, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate your critique, my friend.

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