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I bought a bracelet as a gift But first I slipped it on my wrist Where my intentions took a shift – For really, how could I resist? It looked quite perfect sitting there; I couldn’t help but crack a smile And though it was without compare, A fool could tell it was my style. My friend will think it’s rather great. She’ll love its sleek and cool design But for her gift, she’ll have to wait For this one simply must be mine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/19/2014 5:14:00 PM
They say that it's the thought that counts. But like bad checks and lead balloons, in this case, I don't think that that will bounce. :)
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Date: 8/17/2014 12:34:00 AM
Oh Ilene I do like that poem, I could just picture you doing that, it is also the type of thing that I would do, loved it, take care my friend................Vera...........
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:34:00 PM
lol, had a chuckle here - love your witty writes (hope your friend won't read it!!)
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:24:00 PM
I hate to admit it but I have had that happen to me a few times. I loved your witty poem.
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