Backdrop of Loss

Memories move like shadows,
A slow and mocking waltz
Across a backdrop of loss.
Breakable as glass, tiny fissures
Through my mind.
Malleable as sand - eroded by time, 
Washed away in pieces.
Still, the senses torment: 
Vacant voices, ghostly glimpses,
Wafts of faint perfume -
Your phantom scent 
The worst kind of haunting.
I fear your image has become plastic -
A product of albums
Flipped through yet again:
A cruel, addictive time loop.
And I can't keep my mind 
From creasing, fading, 
Curling at the edges
Like an old photograph.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/15/2013 7:03:00 AM
Another gem...you been stealin' my creative pills?...haha. I love the comparing of your memories to photos...starting to fade...just awesome!
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Date: 1/29/2013 11:27:00 AM
Love this..every single line..
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:56:00 PM
Excellent Poetry!! Wow. You have a new fan. Hugs Michael
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:10:00 PM
Heather, enjoyed seeing you on Craig's winning list.. always~ pd
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Date: 11/9/2012 1:34:00 AM
Congratulations on you well deserved win Heather xx
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the "Loss" contest - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2012 2:23:00 PM
So glad to have read such a talented writer. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2012 10:45:00 AM
congrats on a great win Heather
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Date: 11/8/2012 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Loss" contest Heather. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2012 10:04:00 AM
Old photographs fade, so do memories in time, but always there is a special place where the best hide, always remembered.............Seren
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Date: 11/7/2012 3:52:00 PM
wow, now this is an example of GOOD free verse style poetry. a fave!
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Date: 11/6/2012 2:22:00 PM
I liked this a lot
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