Backdrop of Loss

Memories move like shadows,
A slow and mocking waltz
Across a backdrop of loss.
Breakable as glass, tiny fissures
Through my mind.
Malleable as sand - eroded by time, 
Washed away in pieces.
Still, the senses torment: 
Vacant voices, ghostly glimpses,
Wafts of faint perfume -
Your phantom scent 
The worst kind of haunting.
I fear your image has become plastic -
A product of albums
Flipped through yet again:
A cruel, addictive time loop.
And I can't keep my mind 
From creasing, fading, 
Curling at the edges
Like an old photograph.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Hunter Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Another gem...you been stealin' my creative pills?...haha. I love the comparing of your memories to photos...starting to fade...just awesome!
Flow Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Love this..every single line..
Falotico Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Excellent Poetry!! Wow. You have a new fan. Hugs Michael
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November 10, 2012 at 6:10 PM
Heather, enjoyed seeing you on Craig's winning list.. always~ pd
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November 9, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations on you well deserved win Heather xx
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the "Loss" contest - / / Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 2:23 PM
So glad to have read such a talented writer. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
May Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:45 AM
congrats on a great win Heather
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Loss" contest Heather. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Old photographs fade, so do memories in time, but always there is a special place where the best hide, always remembered.............Seren
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 3:52 PM
wow, now this is an example of GOOD free verse style poetry. a fave!
Smith Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 2:22 PM
I liked this a lot
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