Back To Space - If You Want Peace

I
Gurus of all kinds speak of "space and ether"
To help us imagine Universal Consciousness
I would rather say "God" my sister, my brother -
But to continue conversing, let me use "Sky-ness"

II
When I began to imagine the "Ever I Am," 
I could look at the sky, day or night
Beyond bountiful clouds, or stars and I among
The space between, free of death, fleeting life

III
Sky-ness has allowed me nigh perfect fearlessness
When I die here, I will be everywhere
No longer confined in this trinity: body, soul, spirit
I stare at sky, become sky-ness, not YHVH or Yahweh
I am sky, all the canvas there ever is, space and canvas
Watching, witnessing, coloring Universal Consciousness

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Date: 12/19/2021 2:33:00 PM
What a creative write. I love the huge beautiful sky. I wonder just how big it really is. The full moons are so pretty. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/1/2021 1:27:00 AM
If the human race is there, Anil. There'll be no peace, but love the space you write about, so much there is of it, when one gazes at the stars.
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Date: 11/30/2021 6:27:00 PM
Very creative, loved the beautiful image felt at peace. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 11/30/2021 1:32:00 PM
You have created a beautiful image, Anil. I hope you are well. Thank you for your visit to my Waterfall poem. lots of Love and Hugs
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/30/2021 3:26:00 PM
Blessings Dear Eve, shalom shalom
Date: 11/30/2021 12:13:00 PM
I love that word skyness, you are so creative and so devoted, thank you for gifting you to me, :)
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/30/2021 3:25:00 PM
Blessings Dear Heart
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