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I thought you cared about me from way back when. We were friends, more like good friends. And we also had chemistry and knew something about 'us" but didn't figure that out till later at the end. We shared our company as one and talked freely about our shared interest, vaules, partying sometimes, and well music intrest...and so on Seven-Ten years now passed and I keep thinking of the time you just disappeared on me and left. Only to let your friend Rod/Rock to tell me at the Applebee's that I was working at, "he just up and gotten married and left town, and went to Florida. With no Good-Bye.... When you left, dont you know that I needed you. You showed up to see me at my house and talked with me and even once, you got arrested and I bailed you out..( I know that you appreciated that) Ok the Heart of mine has decided to take the chance and the risk to beleive in what you say and give you the answer yes I want to come out and PLAY.......(But not meaning it that way) What Ive heard you want to try again and if you give me your word that this is all REAL and for me I will dedicate the rest of my life to you.... THIS ONE WASNT GOOD BUT THE NEXT WILL BE

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Date: 7/4/2011 9:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Shanon. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2011 12:24:00 PM
this one was just fine and really emotional expressiions rule the page luv.. impressive piece Shannon...happy 4th luv..
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