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Back of Beyond

In my dreams I go back of beyond
Far, and far away I drift in shadows
Free from all the expectations of life
With the wind my only heart song

Far, and far away I drift in shadows
Grabbing at peace with my open hand
Free from all the expectations of life
Enraptured by just being alone

Grabbing at peace with my open hand
Free from all the expectations of life
Enraptured by just being alone
In my dreams I go back of beyond

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Joe Maverick Date: 3/21/2011 1:51:00 PM Congratulations Barbara, on the win with this piece! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/21/2011 10:27:00 AM A heartfelt congratulations to you Barbara for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 3/21/2011 8:05:00 AM A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/20/2011 12:59:00 PM Beautiful Pantoum!Congrats Barbara on your win---kashinath Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/19/2011 1:07:00 AM Congrats Barbara, enjoyd reading this wonderful Pantoum, love the theme. Harry Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/18/2011 8:26:00 PM Many warm congrats for this win dear BG. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/18/2011 3:50:00 PM Congrats BG on your HM in Paula's Pantoum contest... enjoy your special honor for this vibrant write luv.. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/18/2011 12:57:00 PM I love that line "in my dreams I go back of beyond"....that would be a wonderful lyric to a great song...very meaningful. Well done, Barbara! :) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/18/2011 11:57:00 AM Well done on your win : ) Jack Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/18/2011 11:33:00 AM An awesome job my lady Barbara, great to see your success.. Congratulations on your worthy victory. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 3/12/2011 8:08:00 AM You have penned to well aspects of life here, Barbara! Enjoyed the read!...Gert Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 3/8/2011 11:30:00 AM I like your poem...good luck in the contest ....... I found it harder to keep everything straight the longer the pantoum you have.....George Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2011 3:38:00 PM I am reading really lovely poems using the word "back" yours is no exception. Love it, Barbara. very cool title too. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/5/2011 4:52:00 PM Great one..Enjoyed reading your Pantoum this eve..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/5/2011 4:37:00 PM Beautiful expressions on life, lovely poetic write, Barbara Login to Reply