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Back Grasp Delusions

you barely perch life within any good grasp and choose fragile heights among things false fast your thoughts and dreams back skim on soft limbs holding only thin what has not ever been no good decision ever comes from you you live in delusion with an unreal view we are both threads in the same tapestry but nothing in your head is the same as me

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2019 7:52:00 AM

powerfully penned Cay Cay an emotional piece which I can relate on a personal level my sibling is the total opposite to me - especially love that final stanza Caycay, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Chiri

Date: 5/28/2019 11:43:00 PM

Wow amazing write as always my dear! Simply put no one can be you! They can mimic us but not who we are inside! Loved this!;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/25/2019 2:09:00 AM

No CayCay, no one can be like us remember - we are the rainbow , and we wear silly hats! Love you, Hugs, Jenny.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/17/2019 8:10:00 PM

This reminds me of the relationship between my identical twin and myself, CayCay. "We are both threads in the same tapestry but nothing in your head is the same as me." We can barely keep a conversation, not speaking the same language in most cases.