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Baby's a Star - So Sublime

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(Verse One) My baby's a star, you know She swims in a sea of suns Giggles at my balmy puns That's why I love her Fits like a glove, her My baby's a star, you know She shimmers for the eventide Always lets my crazies slide That's why I love her Yeah, that's why I love ... (Bridge A) Her ... eyes ... I dive deep - dive deep Her ... eyes ... My dreams keep - soft sleep (Chorus) She's the whisper in my breath She's the breath within my blood She's the blood that floods my heart So sublime She's the shine within my eyes She the eyes that pierce my soul The soul that rends my Heaven So sublime She's so sublime (Verse Two) My baby's a star, you know In her bright, commands the sky She lets my many faults get by That's why I love her Set no one above her My baby's a star, you know Warms the heavens with her smile Makes each moment worth my while That's why I love her Yeah, that's why I love ... (Bridge B) Her ... heart ... I dive deep - dive deep Her ... heart ... Our love's keep - love's leap (Chorus) She's the whisper in my breath She's the breath within my blood She's the blood that floods my heart So sublime She's the shine within my eyes She the eyes that pierce my soul The soul that rends my Heaven So sublime She's so sublime - SOLO SECTION - (Bridge One & Two) Her ... eyes ... I dive deep - dive deep Her ... eyes ... My dreams keep - soft sleep Her ... heart ... I dive deep - dive deep Her ... heart ... Our love's keep - love's leap (Chorus) She's the whisper in my breath She's the breath within my blood She's the blood that floods my heart So sublime She's the shine within my eyes She the eyes that pierce my soul The soul that rends my Heaven So sublime She's so sublime (Repeat Chorus Out)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2017 8:09:00 PM

wowowow. this would make ONE AWESOME love song. You did an incredible one here, Gregory!!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2017 11:42:00 PM

Thank you SO much, Andrea - I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3

John Hamilton

Date: 11/12/2017 7:10:00 PM

Love, love, love it Greg!!! Wow!! I can imagine the music, love the transition from bridge 1 to chorus the bridge 2 to chorus then a mix of bridge 1 and 2 then chorus, just brilliant looking forward to the release of this beauty, great song to break the ice with!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2017 11:44:00 PM

Oh, man, John - you are always one whose opinion I value highly when it comes to Lyrics especially ... I am so honored that you read and liked this one! Blessings and thanks so much, Bud! :-)

John Hamilton
Date: 11/12/2017 7:20:00 PM

Just had to fave this beauty!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2017 1:14:00 PM

I'd love to hear it set to music and be a massive hit its absolutely wonderful and i especially love the chorus Greg! I am adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:53:00 PM

All my music is under my moniker "Bahku" and my web site is bahku.com, though most of the songs there are about 30 years old. Blessings, friend! :-) <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:52:00 PM

Thank you so, so much, Jan, I'm so pleased you like it, and while it will NOT be on the album I'm currently recording, it will be on my next project, and possibly an early-release as a CD single, (depends how much my producer likes it and the label).

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/12/2017 12:00:00 PM

this is tops, gregory.. i hope i could hear you read this and let mark massy compose a song for this...so lithesome... huggs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Nette - I am a songwriter/recording artist first and foremost, and I have already written the music for it!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:47:00 PM

I am also presently recording a CD for Hollywood Records, (under my moniker "Bahku"), the first CD single to be released in May 2018 called "Filipina Girl", and my old music has been played on BBC Radio, DWRK Manila, and Radio Indonesia, (among others). My web site is at www.bahku.com :-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2017 8:34:00 AM

What a warm solid write. I enjoyed reading it.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:43:00 PM

Thanks so much, Line - so appreciated! :-) <3

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2017 6:37:00 AM

Will you play this for me on the piano/guitar/violin/mandolin/banjo/drums all to keep me in focus of a beautiful song! I just love these lyrics, they are wonderful, she's the star! I really love the way you took the last part of one line and put it in the first part of the next line within the chorus that is fun and catchy! This is an exciting piece, I loved reading it today, Great work!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:42:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, it's been a while since I wrote a song - it feels good to break that ice again! Blessings! :-)