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(Verse One)

My baby's a star, you know
She swims in a sea of suns
Giggles at my balmy puns
That's why I love her
Fits like a glove, her

My baby's a star, you know
She shimmers for the eventide
Always lets my crazies slide
That's why I love her
Yeah, that's why I love ...

(Bridge A)

Her ... eyes ...
I dive deep - dive deep
Her ... eyes ...
My dreams keep - soft sleep

(Chorus)

She's the whisper in my breath
She's the breath within my blood
She's the blood that floods my heart
So sublime

She's the shine within my eyes
She the eyes that pierce my soul
The soul that rends my Heaven
So sublime
She's so sublime

(Verse Two)

My baby's a star, you know
In her bright, commands the sky
She lets my many faults get by
That's why I love her
Set no one above her

My baby's a star, you know
Warms the heavens with her smile
Makes each moment worth my while
That's why I love her
Yeah, that's why I love ...

(Bridge B)

Her ... heart ...
I dive deep - dive deep
Her ... heart ...
Our love's keep - love's leap

(Chorus)

She's the whisper in my breath
She's the breath within my blood
She's the blood that floods my heart
So sublime

She's the shine within my eyes
She the eyes that pierce my soul
The soul that rends my Heaven
So sublime
She's so sublime

- SOLO SECTION -

(Bridge One & Two)

Her ... eyes ...
I dive deep - dive deep
Her ... eyes ...
My dreams keep - soft sleep

Her ... heart ...
I dive deep - dive deep
Her ... heart ...
Our love's keep - love's leap

(Chorus)

She's the whisper in my breath
She's the breath within my blood
She's the blood that floods my heart
So sublime

She's the shine within my eyes
She the eyes that pierce my soul
The soul that rends my Heaven
So sublime
She's so sublime

(Repeat Chorus Out)

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Date: 11/12/2017 8:09:00 PM
wowowow. this would make ONE AWESOME love song. You did an incredible one here, Gregory!!!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/13/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thank you SO much, Andrea - I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3
Date: 11/12/2017 7:10:00 PM
Love, love, love it Greg!!! Wow!! I can imagine the music, love the transition from bridge 1 to chorus the bridge 2 to chorus then a mix of bridge 1 and 2 then chorus, just brilliant looking forward to the release of this beauty, great song to break the ice with!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/13/2017 11:44:00 PM
Oh, man, John - you are always one whose opinion I value highly when it comes to Lyrics especially ... I am so honored that you read and liked this one! Blessings and thanks so much, Bud! :-)
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/12/2017 7:20:00 PM
Just had to fave this beauty!
Date: 11/12/2017 1:14:00 PM
I'd love to hear it set to music and be a massive hit its absolutely wonderful and i especially love the chorus Greg! I am adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:53:00 PM
All my music is under my moniker "Bahku" and my web site is bahku.com, though most of the songs there are about 30 years old. Blessings, friend! :-) <3
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so, so much, Jan, I'm so pleased you like it, and while it will NOT be on the album I'm currently recording, it will be on my next project, and possibly an early-release as a CD single, (depends how much my producer likes it and the label).
Date: 11/12/2017 12:00:00 PM
this is tops, gregory.. i hope i could hear you read this and let mark massy compose a song for this...so lithesome... huggs
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette - I am a songwriter/recording artist first and foremost, and I have already written the music for it!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:47:00 PM
I am also presently recording a CD for Hollywood Records, (under my moniker "Bahku"), the first CD single to be released in May 2018 called "Filipina Girl", and my old music has been played on BBC Radio, DWRK Manila, and Radio Indonesia, (among others). My web site is at www.bahku.com :-)
Date: 11/12/2017 8:34:00 AM
What a warm solid write. I enjoyed reading it.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line - so appreciated! :-) <3
Date: 11/12/2017 6:37:00 AM
Will you play this for me on the piano/guitar/violin/mandolin/banjo/drums all to keep me in focus of a beautiful song! I just love these lyrics, they are wonderful, she's the star! I really love the way you took the last part of one line and put it in the first part of the next line within the chorus that is fun and catchy! This is an exciting piece, I loved reading it today, Great work!!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, it's been a while since I wrote a song - it feels good to break that ice again! Blessings! :-)
Date: 11/12/2017 5:05:00 AM
I could so listen to these lyrics if they were sung. Of course I love reading them too. Beautifully written, Greg! :)
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 11/12/2017 1:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Julie - I greatly appreciate it, my friend! :-)