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Babylonian Calisthenics



Bow down 
when you hear the music

Stand up
when you hear the sound

Limber low
when you see the golden image
Babel Tower rise pyramid erect 
like a flagpole

Toes arched high,
elbows bent with hand over heart
Eyes swaying side to side,
when the wavy cloth idol music start

Brow pride is palm raised like
battle eagles soaring in the sky
Stripe octave bars ... vocal fawn pull ups
follow the push up bra lung stars —  
Lady Libber tease who lyrically demand bending knees 
to have total loyalty ... no protest hiccups

Babylonian calisthenics,
moral free exercise of mind control
It’s the Caesar peace diet: Wait-loss edition
for every patriotic war starved soul

Babylonian calisthenics is robotic brain wave pathetic

Cardio wavy instructions will teach you
to know when to servile stand, 
and when to grovel, beggarly bow
Know when to voluntarily sweat accept 
a mandatory enlist,
give a dog tag vow ab crunch howl

Then wince the bomb music stop,
tap the mushroom bulge of your global warm belly
And ask yourself,
did you put enough prosthetic coin fat in the 
Veteran of Foreign Wars lean pot?

If not, donate some more submissively supple blood
to the white surrender flag
Which is always scornfully used
as a Babel blues snot rag

So bow down 
when you hear the death music

Stand up
when you hear the siren sound

The politically paid peace mourners 
will tearfully tell you that you’re physically fit
to be buried in the sour ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/30/2018 5:41:00 AM
Amazing and powerful poem Freddie. My first read of your work. Following your present and future poetic journey!
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:20:00 PM
Only YOU could possibly come up with an acid-satirical critique like this one, wrapped up in exercise/warm-up clothing. Well-done, maestro! Season's best! ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/28/2018 10:41:00 AM
What if I am wearing Nike gear, is it still ok to wave? :) Sounds kind of angry to me my friend but once again, written so wonderfully in your amazing style.
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