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Babylonian Calisthenics

Bow down when you hear the music Stand up when you hear the sound Limber low when you see the golden image Babel Tower rise pyramid erect like a flagpole Toes arched high, elbows bent with hand over heart Eyes swaying side to side, when the wavy cloth idol music start Brow pride is palm raised like battle eagles soaring in the sky Stripe octave bars ... vocal fawn pull ups follow the push up bra lung stars — Lady Libber tease who lyrically demand bending knees to have total loyalty ... no protest hiccups Babylonian calisthenics, moral free exercise of mind control It’s the Caesar peace diet: Wait-loss edition for every patriotic war starved soul Babylonian calisthenics is robotic brain wave pathetic Cardio wavy instructions will teach you to know when to servile stand, and when to grovel, beggarly bow Know when to voluntarily sweat accept a mandatory enlist, give a dog tag vow ab crunch howl Then wince the bomb music stop, tap the mushroom bulge of your global warm belly And ask yourself, did you put enough prosthetic coin fat in the Veteran of Foreign Wars lean pot? If not, donate some more submissively supple blood to the white surrender flag Which is always scornfully used as a Babel blues snot rag So bow down when you hear the death music Stand up when you hear the siren sound The politically paid peace mourners will tearfully tell you that you’re physically fit to be buried in the sour ground

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Date: 11/30/2018 5:41:00 AM
Amazing and powerful poem Freddie. My first read of your work. Following your present and future poetic journey!
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:20:00 PM
Only YOU could possibly come up with an acid-satirical critique like this one, wrapped up in exercise/warm-up clothing. Well-done, maestro! Season's best! ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/28/2018 10:41:00 AM
What if I am wearing Nike gear, is it still ok to wave? :) Sounds kind of angry to me my friend but once again, written so wonderfully in your amazing style.
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