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swirling white snowflakes brushed away from frozen cheeks robin redbreast chirps 01/21/21

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Date: 1/23/2021 3:51:00 AM
Beautiful image, very nice Jan!
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Date: 1/23/2021 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/22/2021 10:56:00 AM
Well done! The photo is like a video on the Japanese news last week, except the woman was wearing geta (Japanese wooden clogs) and the snow on each side of her was about one metre above the top of her parasol! Lucky I live in Hawai'i! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/21/2021 8:45:00 PM
Gorgeous Jan. Delicate and pretty.
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Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM
thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2021 4:33:00 PM
Nice.
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Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM
thanks david:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2021 4:25:00 PM
Jan, your haiku is truly beautiful, I love it and your chosen image is stunning _Constance
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Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM
thanks Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2021 4:20:00 PM
vividly described, jan! a lovely poem...
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Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM
thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2021 2:07:00 PM
Hi Jan, This just lovely. I must admit, I could hear the song with the same title in my head. Well done! Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/21/2021 3:00:00 PM
I heard the song on the radio and it inspired the poem:-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 1/21/2021 1:59:00 PM
Fabulous haiku, Jan. One of your best. ~~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/21/2021 3:00:00 PM
aww thanks Victor I do struggle to know if I've written a real haiku or not:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/21/2021 1:10:00 PM
I hope he's telling her to get inside or get a coat! A lovely scene and lines, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/21/2021 1:15:00 PM
yes she is a little underdressed for the weather lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/21/2021 12:55:00 PM
It was cold today, and reading this descriptive haiku made me feel even colder (but in a nice way!)
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Date: 1/21/2021 1:02:00 PM
thanks so much Robert I am so appreciative of your continued support:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2021 12:21:00 PM
Brrr I can feel the chill Jan, but an image I love to see. Love the accompanying gif. Tom
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:31:00 PM
Its so cold today snow is possibly predicted we will wait and see. May go for another walk later... all being well we come out of lock down on 1st Feb, can meet friends and family out side from saturday... doubt i can see mum until Feb though xx Jan xx