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swirling white snowflakes
brushed away from frozen cheeks
robin redbreast chirps

01/21/21

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Mark Koplin

Date: 1/23/2021 3:51:00 AM

Beautiful image, very nice Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2021 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/22/2021 10:56:00 AM

Well done! The photo is like a video on the Japanese news last week, except the woman was wearing geta (Japanese wooden clogs) and the snow on each side of her was about one metre above the top of her parasol! Lucky I live in Hawai'i! Aloha! Rico

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/21/2021 8:45:00 PM

Gorgeous Jan. Delicate and pretty.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM

thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

David Byrne

Date: 1/21/2021 4:33:00 PM

Nice.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM

thanks david:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 1/21/2021 4:25:00 PM

Jan, your haiku is truly beautiful, I love it and your chosen image is stunning _Constance

Jan Allison
Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM

thanks Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/21/2021 4:20:00 PM

vividly described, jan! a lovely poem...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/22/2021 9:55:00 AM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/21/2021 2:07:00 PM

Hi Jan, This just lovely. I must admit, I could hear the song with the same title in my head. Well done! Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2021 3:00:00 PM

I heard the song on the radio and it inspired the poem:-) hugs jan xxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/21/2021 1:59:00 PM

Fabulous haiku, Jan. One of your best. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2021 3:00:00 PM

aww thanks Victor I do struggle to know if I've written a real haiku or not:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/21/2021 1:10:00 PM

I hope he's telling her to get inside or get a coat! A lovely scene and lines, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2021 1:15:00 PM

yes she is a little underdressed for the weather lol:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2021 12:55:00 PM

It was cold today, and reading this descriptive haiku made me feel even colder (but in a nice way!)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2021 1:02:00 PM

thanks so much Robert I am so appreciative of your continued support:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/21/2021 12:21:00 PM

Brrr I can feel the chill Jan, but an image I love to see. Love the accompanying gif. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2021 12:31:00 PM

Its so cold today snow is possibly predicted we will wait and see. May go for another walk later... all being well we come out of lock down on 1st Feb, can meet friends and family out side from saturday... doubt i can see mum until Feb though xx Jan xx

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