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Baby Interruptus

Somehow, through the haze that our lives have become, we ended up next to each other, under the covers, with darkness and silence all around. The soft sound of her rhythmic breathing; the faint scent of perfume worn off by the long, hectic day; the tickle of her hair in my face, reminds me that I still have a pulse. Lightly, I stroke the length of her soft, bare back; Gently, I press my lips where an earring was recently removed. In a half sleep, she purrs and subtly moves her body closer to mine. With eyes closed our bodies begin to melt into each other and a stirring of passion, long subdued, begins to awaken from beneath the slumber. Silent is the darkness. Slowly we adjust, turning towards each other, with anticipation keeping our worn bodies in motion against the want of sleep for which we lack. A muffled creak escapes from a tired coil in the box spring beneath the weathered mattress, stifling the movement of our entangling limbs. An unheard awareness of motion from the corner of the room. A sigh. A peep. A moan. A cry and a wail. The pain of the colic has awakened the reminder of a love we once shared without fear of making a noise. The bodies untangle, unfulfilled. She slips out from under the covers, dons her cotton robe and tends to the miracle struggling with life anew not knowing if or when the missed moment might occur again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/8/2013 9:25:00 PM
Joe, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:52:00 PM
Better Late Than Never...Terrific Poetry. Hearty Congratulations
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Date: 11/14/2012 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Free Verse Writers" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your superb win in this contest,Joe....
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Joe! hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/11/2012 11:08:00 PM
CONGRATS JOE ON A MOST MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN FOR FREE VERSE LUV ..
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Date: 11/11/2012 7:27:00 PM
A sigh. A peep. A moan. A cry and a wail. ............. is all took' Good win' Nate
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Date: 4/1/2012 9:09:00 AM
Wonderful write Joe.
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Date: 3/23/2011 4:04:00 AM
Joe, A beautiful poem, congratulations on your win:))
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations to you Joe for your win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:08:00 AM
Wondering writing, Joe. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Elaine
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Date: 3/21/2011 12:42:00 AM
what a poetic delight,joe! hapy congrats for the big win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/20/2011 3:35:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful success in Catie's contest ..an excellent entry my friend..enjoy another chart topping win..
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 3/20/2011 10:07:00 AM
Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Joe. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2011 8:14:00 AM
Good to see you near the top Joe. Congratulations on your worthy honor in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:05:00 AM
VEry good, Joe. It sure has that unrhymed feel to it. I really enjoyed it! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:59:00 AM
Nicel done, Joe, and a good example of totally free verse. Sad but compelling story behind this one. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 8:07:00 AM
Awe what a gem! Love it! ;) wilma
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Date: 4/28/2010 10:06:00 AM
very good write and thanks for your kind comments faleshia
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