Baby Interruptus

Somehow, through the haze that our lives have become,
we ended up next to each other, 
under the covers, 
with darkness and silence all around.

The soft sound of her rhythmic breathing; 
the faint scent of perfume worn off by the long, hectic day; 
the tickle of her hair in my face, 
reminds me that I still have a pulse.

Lightly, I stroke the length of her soft, bare back;
Gently, I press my lips where an earring was recently removed.

In a half sleep, she purrs and subtly moves her body closer to mine.
With eyes closed our bodies begin to melt into each other 
and a stirring of passion, long subdued, 
begins to awaken from beneath the slumber.

Silent is the darkness.

Slowly we adjust, 
turning towards each other, 
with anticipation keeping our worn bodies in motion 
against the want of sleep for which we lack.

A muffled creak escapes 
from a tired coil in the box spring beneath the weathered mattress, 
stifling the movement of our entangling limbs.

An unheard awareness of motion 
from the corner of the room.
 
A sigh. 
A peep. 
A moan. 
A cry 
and a wail. 

The pain of the colic 
has awakened the reminder of a love we once shared 
without fear of making a noise.

The bodies untangle, unfulfilled. 

She slips out from under the covers, 
dons her cotton robe 
and tends to the miracle struggling with life anew 
not knowing if or when the missed moment 
might occur again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 8, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Joe, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
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May 8, 2013 at 8:52 PM
Better Late Than Never...Terrific Poetry. Hearty Congratulations
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November 14, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Free Verse Writers" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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November 12, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your superb win in this contest,Joe....
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November 11, 2012 at 11:16 PM
Congratulations on your win, Joe! hugs, Leonora
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November 11, 2012 at 11:08 PM
CONGRATS JOE ON A MOST MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN FOR FREE VERSE LUV ..
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November 11, 2012 at 7:27 PM
A sigh. A peep. A moan. A cry and a wail. ............. is all took' Good win' Nate
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April 1, 2012 at 9:09 AM
Wonderful write Joe.
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March 23, 2011 at 4:04 AM
Joe, A beautiful poem, congratulations on your win:))
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March 21, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations to you Joe for your win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
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March 21, 2011 at 7:08 AM
Wondering writing, Joe. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Elaine
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March 21, 2011 at 12:42 AM
what a poetic delight,joe! hapy congrats for the big win! :) huggs, nette
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March 20, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful success in Catie's contest ..an excellent entry my friend..enjoy another chart topping win..
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March 20, 2011 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC
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March 20, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Joe. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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March 20, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Good to see you near the top Joe. Congratulations on your worthy honor in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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July 3, 2010 at 11:05 AM
VEry good, Joe. It sure has that unrhymed feel to it. I really enjoyed it! LUv, Andrea
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July 3, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Nicel done, Joe, and a good example of totally free verse. Sad but compelling story behind this one. Love, Carolyn
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July 3, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Awe what a gem! Love it! ;) wilma
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April 28, 2010 at 10:06 AM
very good write and thanks for your kind comments faleshia
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