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Baby Blue-13

innocence wears wings, sweet blue scent- death arrived with ease MagiCicada Poetry Contest June 18, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2018 12:24:00 PM

ahhh, so sad but beautiful. Loved how you worked that title in with blue scent. Congrats. Yours had great imagery.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/24/2018 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

John Lawless

Date: 6/21/2018 7:45:00 PM

Well Laura, this is a little mind twister...lean one way or.....the other and its shades of meaning enter shadows

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2018 3:40:00 PM

Beautiful and so touching, Laura. Congrats on your top win.

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/21/2018 10:29:00 AM

Thought provoking indeed! A well-deserved win, congratulations Luloo. Mick

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/21/2018 8:22:00 AM

There is a sad lightness about this piece that engages heart and mind. Beautifully done Luloo. Congratulations on your first place finish inmy contest! Thank you for your support :) xomo!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/21/2018 7:54:00 AM

So touching, Luloo. CONGRATS! Janice