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Minions, determine little creatures In the wide screen That stir lots of trouble with their funny little slurs Don’t know if they are his or hers They look like yellow Hot Tamales jelly beans Wearing little blue bebe overalls that are always clean Tiny little hands and feet black gloves and shoes They are always full of motion Gargling sounds feeling free Between their little face goggles they wear Their only difference is one or two big eyes Excursion to who knows where Their slapstick-infused shenanigans little Minions In the spotlight dancing Believe me! That keep the little ones entranced and in their seats They wiggle and they giggle when the Minion wants Ba….na….na!!! I wonder what they dream If they drive each other bananas Determine little creatures in the wide screen Ba….na….na!!! 2/25/2016

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Date: 2/28/2016 12:33:00 PM
aha! Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:28:00 AM
Eve,, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2016 8:00:00 PM
haha, They are bananas eating bananas. GREAT poem. Congrats. I see you won. And I bet you got a high placement with this one.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/26/2016 8:18:00 PM
Third place in which I say Hip... Hip... Hooray!! I really didn't know what to write until the last minute. It seems I have been doing a lot of procrastinating
Date: 2/25/2016 11:57:00 PM
so cuttte... they look like bananas too, eve.. enjoyed this one; so much better than mine!.. huggs
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Date: 2/25/2016 5:41:00 PM
I haven't seen the movie/movies but the little captions are hilarious..Enjoyed reading your work..Must be a contest for this is the second or third one of these that I have seen..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2016 5:27:00 PM
I've never seen minions so your poem really made me laugh Eve - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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