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B. B. Gone

Hollering my pain Swallow me, blackness, swallow! Rid me of wronging! That I do tonight My lone witness a guitar Watch me weep the sea Just a dark stool I'see Now not even me to bear As steps sound my leave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 1/14/2010 6:02:00 PM
Creative approach to the topic. I really like the 5th line. Nice one! Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 1/12/2010 10:15:00 AM
Very good triple Haiku Matt....:JP]
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Matt. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best. Love, Carol
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