B. B. Gone

Hollering my pain
Swallow me, blackness, swallow!
Rid me of wronging!

That I do tonight
My lone witness a guitar
Watch me weep the sea

Just a dark stool I'see
Now not even me to bear
As steps sound my leave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 14, 2010 at 6:02 PM
Creative approach to the topic. I really like the 5th line. Nice one! Good luck in the contest. Karen
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January 12, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Very good triple Haiku Matt....:JP]
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January 12, 2010 at 7:04 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Matt. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best. Love, Carol
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