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Azure Vistas



"Azure Vistas"

Azure vistas presented themselves to me
rolling inwards the clouds like tumbleweeds
mercilessly bump fallen angels off the map
like torrents of rain falling petulantly on blunt contracts

I glimpsed the sweet refrain of a resurrection
swift upon a storm of golden rays 
the bare feet of new tongues and minds steamrolling
steampunks doing things ad hoc, faux fresh, indifferently

disparate shades of blue whip up my Sie
a capital Y as in I, in the Am, of You and me 
the murmurations of underlying prophecy
we play cards at the suede green table of grand Maestro unseen

euchre invested ignoble, another’s justice perceived as irreverently noble,
in forgotten poetic vestries; slow minds are confronted 
by orange skinned drones, political demons 
democratically brown-eyed snowblown cold and frozen
for all time crisply seen in truth for what they truly are silent Chernobyls

hiding sins, their devilled eggs and debauchery glide silkily in,
impeachments swept swiftly under the whispy cornsilk rug,
far from shining stars they walk the thin line like dead men
chains around their ankles and their necks, yet still lecturing – 
can you believe it? what is wrong 
with those very dull Americans, taking in that red pill

blown like a pile of leaves scattered and n’er in unity
wide open the path  is swept, the much wanted and needed
blistering I cannot believe the gaul, you hear them state they’ve won, yet -
the uncalculated temerity, all aflame, melting the hidden 
while in the hand of Daniel’s 7 the philospher’s stone Little Horn looks on

all the world’s a stage that one thinks laughing, let all the beasts 
gather up their liquid words and thoughts vent their spleens in the chalice 
that’s not found true north, nor home, where a swift deal is never met Below,
to be seated the seeded new king of the new world, a bitter tincture 
best delivered mind-f’d drunk, swiftly presented to the pursed lips 
and unsiezed warring minds of complete failures

to over promise then under-deliver an unseized complete victory, 
the ringleader still sings his song once sweet becomes jarring
and unbelievably a prophetic nightmare -
and the whole show, in real time, dissolves into a catastrophic circus,
run by blind monkeys who beat their chests like "Sieg Heil" baboons

the unbelievable novelty that trumps are ever winning glistening beings 
is not all gold and is now seen full-frontal naked by the eyes and minds 
of an entire shell-shocked world, stunned frightened ptsd creatures 
and on the sidelines, the ever-present eagerly awaiting salivating jackyls smiling widely, they oblige and throw more rope to the overboastful
 checkmating their own hidden agendas and meanings

a new trinity, is seated now on soulless fascist seats making swift enemies 
of friends – yet, quick to defend themselves, they dictators? 
"Preposterious!", they respond, "Never" … not like some – 
this is all bookmarked by the disgruntled servile we the people blues 
for burning those books at the stake later rather than much sooner; 
a civil war never anticipated at all now enters this story, its boiling in the mix

their tribulations move on and on, the story appears never-ending,
such a tragic comedy, a terrible unravelling mess now proudly presents
in their ruptured rapture hearts still fondling their 
ragged resolution blue ribbons pinned democratically 
to their white-flagged breasts, they still bleet like sheep, 
no resolution is reached, the nightmare continues

what comes next at the ball game? bullseyes become crucifix;
the war room table swept up and cleaned in right red cruelty
the pink befriended enemy is seen as pure and a much wanted ally 
trumpets are blowing they are business partners making good deals
while the front lawn of a white house is denigrated to selling cars

A Lion different from that of beast, long forgotten roars long-toothed 
and sharp lux vitae lux, lux vitae lux, is watching 
from somewhere above below, jaws now wide open, 
It is ravenously hungry to right the feed in Its Quickening’s path; 
the foggy clouds in each below’s subjective vision, seem to part, 

and like a storm It arrives 
from the tenebris fauces lucisv, 
and in the burning Light, 
It begins breathing everyone 
and everything up 

their uncoloured soft everything, all as one now, now all the same,
no differences to distinguish who’s to blame, 
the corrupt vulgates of a blue velvet house of cracked cards,
the marooned kneeling regiments by red republican dictator beds 
all steamrolled now, together, like bowling pins, taken up and out

their valuable stocks mined and cleaned, 
held up like Baptist heads
invaluable for all to see, ruthlessly ransacked 
the cue sticks chalked professionally, 
the blunt side swiftly unracked

the cheap corner shot taken by one world trumped, blocked
see the white balls miss the lined pockets, and
the dog’s tail like a stick beating hits the mark
the black balls wagging their transcribed prescriptions all licked

the game’s at large 
the bad seeds sacked
the carpetbag is filling up
in Azure vistas 

a myth, 
the forgotten outsider 

the win, 
concrete



Candide Diderot ‘25 


“All that glitters is not gold.”


“I saw in my vision by night, and behold, the four winds of heaven were stirring up the Great Sea. And four great beasts came up from the sea, each different from the other.” 









Vulgate/
Latin vulgata ‘prepared for the public’, feminine past participle of vulgare, from vulgus ‘common people’. 

tenebris fauces lucisv/Latin.

carpet-bagging/Definition.

dog's tails/as in "Wag the Dog".
"Wag the dog is a political term for the act of creating a diversion from a damaging issue usually through military force. It stems from the generic use of the term to mean a small and seemingly unimportant entity (the tail) controls a bigger, more important one (the dog)."




Rev 5 (NIV)
Daniel 7 (NIV) 
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Anaya Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:42 PM
Take heart, Don and Elon, two peas in a pod A fraudulent king and a wanna be god But heed the warning to both great and small: Pride always cometh before the fall. my prediction; summer upheavals. Warmest wishes
Anaya Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 11:11 PM
xo, poetess together we stand woman to woman. I'll keep on fighting the good fight with words loud so that even the deaf will hear. It was a pleasure reading your poetry and sharing thoughts on a difficult subject. Let's do this again soon, looking forward. ,)
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:45 PM
My wish is that you are safe over there. I have friends in the U.S.A. and they will be reading this poem and my comments as well. We are living in challenging times, and the thought that we are all in this together - is both reassuring - and frightening. United we stand, divided we fall.xx
Anaya Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:42 PM
It's all so dreadful. I count my blessings, as they say. I've ignored the rest of the world for lack of motivation, my focus on D.T. smothers. Good luck to the missionaries all of them, bless their hearts.
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:28 PM
https://youtu.be/LT3cERVRoQo?si=IGyT6RnqlqNFenwC
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:19 PM
Thank you. My thoughts from one woman to another. Like some poets, the world has become unhinged, some parts are suffering the Sylvia Plath effect and others are being beheaded for not fitting the regime, while others have the sick ego of de Sade. MAGA in my eyes was a lovely concept to begin with, but watching the dirt of politics play out over there, your side of the world, from the get go, the whole play both blue and red, terribly unhinged. Perhaps Bowie (with Reznor) was onto something.
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:16 PM
I have a cousin (female) who has committed to a missionary assignment (destination unknown, as she tells me for security reasons she cannot divulge). This poem is for Renee. I hope for her sake not Syria which is now Al Queda- run, parading women naked down streets and shooting them dead unmercifully in front of their children (over 1000 men, women and children all innocent civilians Alewites and Christians executed without mercy in the past few days); I have read of a teen made to execute his/her family, I cannot imagine the horror that teen endured nor their family’s terror. And then we have militant Islamists beheading more than 70 humans including women, children and the elderly (discovered on February 14 in a church of the Evangelical and Baptist Center of Congo and Africa (CEBCEA) in Kasanga, near the village of Maiba, in the Lubero area, in the province of North Kivu, in the east of the Democratic Republic of Congo). Let us hope she is not being sent to the Congo.
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:16 PM
It is more than just America/Russia/Ukraine. The times are biblically imploding and in many cases with much inhumanity – violence and bloodshed – and children are not being spared. A script writer couldn’t have written it better... it is sticking like tarzan grip adhesive word-for-word ...to what is read in that good Book. Godspeed California girl – all Americans aren’t bad, but the country under current leadership seems to be infested with spreading black mould. I would not want to be living in America in these times. America is looking quite abandoned by the friends (once strong allies) now supporting Ukraine ... and now with the tariffs - hmm, well the mind boggles, what next will unfold for America and Her people. Will the "Blue" over there do it any better?
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:16 PM
My cousin is reading my poems (as is family), and she knows my view on her stance; she is incredibly brave, and I will support her which ever road she takes in life - but I have said this to her, and I will say it again (Renee), family would not think less of her if she renegged and remained at home. My cousin and I are both from different religious denominations. She is evangelical hard-line; I am non-practicing Anglican – but it is clear to both of us – something much larger than what is seen in America (as being the much touted leader of the “free world”) – is unfolding. America’s position in the world is changing. I fear, like a sore festering, it will get worse before it gets better - for America, and for the rest of our world.
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:14 PM
The Quickening/Definition.
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:27 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quickening
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:14 PM
“You don’t have the cards,” Trump taunted Ukrainian President Volodymyr Zelenskyy.
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:18 PM
Politico article, 10Mar2025. https://www.politico.eu/article/donald-trump-ukraine-war-russia-military-aid-intelligence-gaps-defense/
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:17 PM
Nations/World Leaders supporting Ukraine/Zelenskyy - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2025_Trump%E2%80%93Zelenskyy_meeting
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:14 PM
John the Revelator (John of Patmos). https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_of_Patmos
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:19 PM
not to be confused with John the Baptist. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_the_Baptist
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:14 PM
Daniel 7 (NIV)
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March 12, 2025 at 3:20 PM
https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Daniel%207&version=NIV
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:14 PM
Rev 5 (NIV). A different type of Lion.
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:21 PM
https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Revelation%205&version=NIV
Diderot Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:13 PM
“John the Revelator”/Depeche Mode
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March 12, 2025 at 3:16 PM
LYRICS, “John the Revelator”/Depeche Mode https://genius.com/Depeche-mode-john-the-revelator-lyrics
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March 12, 2025 at 3:15 PM
https://youtu.be/ZHI2tInxT0A?si=v4VotiMbfot3cIPo
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