Aztec Summer

The Mexican midsummer sun
beamed down mercilessly, vertically,
so that men's heads and shoulders glowed
but their faces, and every human expression,
disappeared, dark and intense in the radiant noon,
and their bodies were illuminated 
only for a moment at a time
with the pounding of arms and legs.
From almost as high as the sun,
thousands upon thousands upon thousands of eyes,
worshipful and expectant and desperate,
gazed downward, almost vertically, it seemed,
and the stands, foreboding and tall,
were part temple, part cauldron,
and saw some dreams come to fruition
and many shattered in despair.
On fields partially scorched and partially green,
the gateway to triumph was so deep
that heroes almost had time enough
to turn in celebration 
half a moment after
their heroism had crossed the line,
yet half a moment before
it had nestled in the back of the net.
Story-tellers, men of many tongues, 
celebrated caricatures in their own right,
screamed feverishly to the masses,
to tell of the drama as it unfolded, 
rolling cameras projected moving images
and snapping cameras froze images in time,
and both launched their moments, moving and still,
into the eternity of divine drama.
A winter and a summer, and a change in between,
and a summer and a winter, and ten thousand miles away,
young boys and men, and a girl or two,
marvelled at the spectacle, and revelled in the glory,
and dreamed that it was theirs.
From three or six seasons, and ten thousand miles away,
I fell so deeply and dearly in love
with the Aztec summer's noon.

10th August 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lindley Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 7:09 AM
I found this to be a remarkable poetic gem my great friend. With the heart and immense depth your poetry shows. A fav.
Sharp Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Robert. Some of the fonder memories of my teens.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:13 AM
You have tremendous talent and this piece is a testament to that talent.
Sharp Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, very high praise greatly valued
Messina Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Excellent poetry, Lawrence! You have a wicked pen (meaning awesome) my friend. I have also read some of your other work. Don't stop writing, brother you have too much talent to show. All the best, Charlie
Sharp Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thanks Charles, vey kind of you, such encouragement makes me want to write.
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Awesome power in your words..I enjoyed the ride ..well written poem, Lawrence.
Sharp Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Vijay, I'm always pleased at a write being enjoyed.
Koria Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 1:29 AM
Beautiful! I felt transported to the place you were describing.
Sharp Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Thanks Jasmine, appreciated.
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