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Ay Caramba

I gaze at the sky with wonder What secrets does it holds up yonder Guess I'll never know Nearing the end of my show Would sure flick my flicker, ay caramba!!!

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/12/2017 11:52:00 AM

After we pass we get to travel anywhere in the universe no charge.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/12/2017 4:36:00 PM

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/12/2017 1:33:00 PM

I am almost.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/12/2017 12:14:00 PM

Forgot about that... but we have to PASS ON!!! NOT READY!!!!!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/12/2017 8:15:00 AM

I don't wonder what's up there//but the weight of all that air//made me gray//and squished away//most of my beautiful hair! CARAMBA SAN JACKSAN!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/12/2017 8:20:00 AM

Still got my gorgeous luscious white crop!!! Oops sorry JJ! Some of are blessed... led a sparkling good life! Ay Caramba!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/12/2017 6:57:00 AM

There will probably be flights up to the highest sky while you are alive my friend! You aren't near death! However the only thing, it would probably cost around $500,000 to go up! I know I can't afford that, could you? If you can...is it worth that? You have written a magnificent poem, one that I enjoyed reading this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/12/2017 7:01:00 AM

Can I afford it... NO! Would I jump at the chance if I ould... YEE HAW!!!