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Away To La Senza

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Humourous Poem Poetry Contest

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Andy Velvet

Date: 8/2/2023 6:59:00 AM

Hahaha very funny Jan! Beautiful

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/13/2023 2:57:00 PM

Ha ha Jan: you always make me laugh. I guess we can give him 2 points for trying. SuZ

Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2023 9:24:00 PM

love it , excellent

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/12/2023 1:58:00 AM

Jan, that hilarious and gave me a laugh… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2023 4:10:00 PM

Excellent example, Jan! Probably he bought smaller to make her butt hang out and her boobs pop!

Valsa George

Date: 7/9/2023 6:50:00 PM

This often happens. Men buy gifts, especially clothing to please their wives and give them a surprise. Unfortunately it results in making the relationship worse as it may be either under size or over size. Poor Fred..... Quite humorous Jan. Congratulations on your win.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/5/2023 4:28:00 PM

This is really funny and it made me laugh a lot! A fave for me.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2023 3:27:00 AM

I'm not sure what the sponsor will think lol i was inspired by the original contest which was pulled and is now bottle garden! hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2023 1:03:00 PM

- Presumably he hadn't seen her body for years ... :))) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2023 3:26:00 AM

thanks Anne-Lise lol:-) hugs jan xx

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/5/2023 5:53:00 AM

I heard the expression, "it's the thought that counts" LOL cute one.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2023 10:06:00 AM

maybe not on this occasion lol :-) hugs Jan xx

David Fisher

Date: 7/4/2023 5:35:00 PM

Funny and on the money, except for poor Fred!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2023 10:06:00 AM

thanks David xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/4/2023 3:41:00 PM

Jan, ha ha, hilarious, made me laugh! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2023 10:06:00 AM

thanks so much Tania. I posted it before we got our sad news. I am so glad i was mid way through the judging I needed to keep going to smile. hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/4/2023 2:45:00 PM

If this is the same Fred that’s in the asylum and afraid of his wife, maybe we should help her get to him. That’s a skimpy teddy.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2023 3:17:00 PM

lol Lin, nooo poor fred in the asylum is seeking asylum from his wife she is a real vache:-( hugs Jan xx