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Away

Away, I finally figured out how could i be so stupid so hurtfull so disrespectful Away, I see how badly I hurt you how dumb I made you feel the lies the tears i caused I'm sorry Away, was not a vacation Not paradise Because while i was Away, I noticed how bad i made you suffer I'm sorry I suffer just thing of how bad i treated you and I deserve every bit of the suffering. Away, I say I'm sorry I know many believe I'm not but in my heart and mind I am! Away! Deticated to: My mom

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Date: 6/21/2009 9:04:00 PM
Nice description of family relations here. You eventually overcame your guilt. We all know situations like this. Nice write! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/29/2009 4:20:00 AM
wow you actually feel the emotion in this one
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Date: 5/28/2009 7:02:00 PM
Reminds me of something id say to my friend Jacob. Nicely penned.
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