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Awareness First

Awareness of cold and biting pain Ruthless purpose of wind and pouring rain A wolf cries out to his moon again I am outside, alone and vaguely afraid. When thunder strikes and hael hits earth Flashes of light do fear and moaning birth Waters angrily crashing through hostile firth I am outside, alone and vaguely afraid. Pupils dilated for the dark and danger Peace and light – which is stranger? I am this wild place’s only ranger I am outside, alone and vaguely afraid. My frame I glimpse in a window’s reflection Not feral, not savage but far from perfection At once I observe a mental correction: I am outside, alone and very afraid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/3/2025 10:56:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:18:00 PM
Vanessa, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2013 4:32:00 AM
Vanessa, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 8/23/2013 9:46:00 AM
Amazing piece. It seems to be a bit of a conundrum with actually knowing who you are, yet valuing that self-worth through the doubt. Tremendous job!
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Vanessa Hollenbach
Date: 8/23/2013 1:02:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words Drake :)

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