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Awareness awake, body sleeps

when sleep upon us creeps in restful stillness deep simply looking at body mode changing we may if we choose without resistance or excuse allow mind-body to rest whilst attentive at a crest when falls the cognitive tumbler body slips into slumber as of its organic function whilst we remain in meditation employing formless awareness independent of in-form consciousness going in within as a bliss mist no aspect resident which may resist 09-August-2020

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Date: 8/14/2020 6:47:00 AM
I love the lines "when falls the cognitive slumber/body slips into slumber". I'm an insomniac so I guess for me it would have gone more like " when fails a cognitive blunder/body misses slumber." I also like that the rhyme and meter do not follow a strict structure. Nice work keep it up.
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Date: 8/14/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Megan! In deep meditation, we may slip into sleep and yet be restfully self aware minus body. Turiya.