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Awakes My Garden

Seemingly, sudden, Restful sleep all but over. Wild tricolored Irises, vivid white, sun centered, Shasta Daisies, And Cosmos of azures, fuchsias and buttery cups; Babies breathing, eager to begin once again, In order to forsake the bronze, soft textured crustiness Of the newly milled mulching caps, as they race for The viewer and the gazer's glorious prize. Even with a long and empty storehouse, The beautiful bachelors and bachelorettes All remember how to drink From natures vase, And where to turn their faces For one fleeting and lasting Ray of purpose. 5/8/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/16/2014 12:32:00 PM
A very creative write with colorful and beautiful imagery. I really enjoyed reading your winning poem, Lisa. Congratulations to you!
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Lisa Lee
Date: 5/16/2014 12:59:00 PM
I appreciate it, Kelly! Thank you!
Date: 5/15/2014 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Lisa
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Date: 5/15/2014 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph! :)
Date: 5/15/2014 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Lisa
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, so much Dr. Ram!
Date: 5/15/2014 4:58:00 AM
Lisa congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:52:00 AM
I meant, "you're"
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Lisa Lee
Date: 5/15/2014 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow! Your a sweetheart!
Date: 5/15/2014 2:10:00 AM
LISA, Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~
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Lisa Lee
Date: 5/15/2014 9:48:00 AM
Your so kind, Linda! Thank you so much! :)

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