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Awakening From Stupor

The Echo Of Stars Galaxies away the echo of stars make her bloom this rose made of warm inside a heated hand * Fine tuning her soul to the chime of a thousand crystal pieces she blasts out and planets resound within her Chalice heart; Resonating inside her, the peeling bells of Notre- Dame contain her whole Universe... Tucked safely inside an IVEAN cloak she lives free no longer part of this global world. A star of multiple constellations, she belongs only to One identifiable light, HIS own. Evolving endlessly in time she reverberates and rings entering God's vestibule of heaven without a single sound Wearing the immortal crown of existence she delves in, a crowning moment of glory The mirror shatters in a million tiny pieces and all of truth arrives, making her whole once again. “it’s not desire per say but the clinging ~ that stifles soul and stops heart from singing enlivening silence sets our soul free ~ vibrant in the now, joyful and carefree”

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Date: 1/15/2024 2:43:00 AM
Adored reading this very moving awesomely expresses joyful and carefree write.
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Date: 1/14/2024 12:04:00 PM
Who else would use such a creative imagination, but you my dear friend.. this is a great idea for the contest and you have expressed it so well..
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Date: 1/14/2024 4:28:00 AM
Gosh, dear Rose, what a majestic and astounding poem you've knitted with such eloquent wordsmithery that just reaches the heart and blooms with the fragrance of a rose.. When the soul finally finds its essence and meaning, in His embrace, everything feels ephemeral as she ascends from a materialistic ambience and ascends her aura in the divine embrace of Almighty.. That connection with the God is absolutely so pure and a blessing! This poem is one of my FAVs from you, absolutely, keep writing :)
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Date: 1/13/2024 4:46:00 PM
wow, this is magnificent, Rose! I especially liked these words: The mirror shatters in a million tiny pieces and all of truth arrives, making her whole once again. Powerful and inspirational! These lines were wise ones: “it’s not desire per say but the clinging ~ that stifles soul and stops heart from singing. You have a lovely soul filled with such depth beautifully expressed within your poems. hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/14/2024 4:08:00 AM
Good morning dear Sara, so happy to see you on my page today, glad you enjoyed the poem, sending love to light your way.

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