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Awakening

The sounds of water: a gentle gurgling in the glades; brooks babble. The rains have awoken the waterfalls. All the little valleys sing. Drops bounce from rock to rock, joyfully jumping valleyward. On the banks of the creek witch hazel foretells the coming of spring. 2/18/2018

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Date: 9/17/2018 1:54:00 PM
Lovely tribute to awakening life. Well done, Agnes.
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Date: 3/13/2018 5:43:00 PM
Your poem delights my senses with breathtaking beauty Agnes. Captivating imagery and amazing sprinklings of alliteration lifts this poem into the heavens. Superb poetry my friend. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/13/2018 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, you're too kind.
Date: 3/3/2018 5:19:00 PM
A very sweet spring awakening. I was pleased to find one I had not seen recently!!
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:50:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and your support, Andrea.
Date: 2/19/2018 11:32:00 AM
Absolutely great. Your poem resonates with the hope of spring.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Dale.
Date: 2/18/2018 8:50:00 PM
I'm so hungry for spring. Love this.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2018 4:25:00 PM
Me, too, Maureen. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 2/18/2018 8:08:00 PM
Such a beautiful image you created with this Agnes, great write :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis.
Date: 2/18/2018 7:56:00 PM
A really peaceful poem...With lots of imagery...Enjoyed it...All the best
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo.

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