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Awakening

This morning I saw daffodils Unfurl their yellow heads, Awakening from sleeping In their cozy winter beds. The weather isn’t very warm But there’s sufficient sun To send the message that it won’t Be long ‘til spring’s begun. The crocuses, already out, Must now agree to share Their soil with these emerging bulbs; Of course, it’s only fair. The landscape, dressed for winter, Looking bare and brown and bleak Will be bursting forth with color Hopefully, within the week.

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Date: 3/24/2024 5:39:00 PM
Your fertile sense of natures gift emerges from the page. I guess when you right a poem a day, you become quite a talented sage. :)
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Date: 3/12/2024 8:02:00 PM
How nice that the color is returning early this year. In Chicago too!
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Date: 3/10/2024 1:49:00 PM
How beautifully you describe the awakening of spring and its flowers! I love the first stanza especially….” Unfurl their yellow heads….in their cosy winter beds” that is just lovely Ilene! Debx
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