Awakening

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01/22/24

Awakening It's not desire per say but the clinging ~ that stifles soul and stops heart from singing, but hindrances come from suffocation. Or may be encompassed by obsession . Not religious but act always righteous ~ Consciousness wakes up simultaneous. Confusion and decision may quarrel ~ Yet self-realisation runs parallel. Emotions wobble being nostalgic ~ Yet enlightenment to follow logic. Search in your soul to awake from stupor ~ Contemplation to overcome torpor.

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/22/2024 7:45:00 AM

I love how your words flow just seamlessly with the line of enquiry and how youve rhymed throughout with so much depth! Pleasure reading your work dear anisha. Best wishes for the contest

Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/23/2024 5:24:00 AM

Thanks for visit and appreciation .