Awakening

David's awakening was via mail order catalog and the contents of his mother's lingerie drawer, which she had introduced him to. He lived alone in the house that she had bought. He was never David when his mother came to visit; he was always Debbie. Bite Size Poem 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Date wrote: 30-05-2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/6/2021 6:56:00 PM

Ooh. This is well done, Terry. A bite-size winner for me. Thanks, gw

Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2021 7:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon. I appreciate your comments.

Ruby Kelly

Date: 6/1/2021 11:09:00 AM

Incredible. Rarely see anyone on here write about the struggles of the LGBT community. Love this! - Ruby.

Terry Miller
Date: 6/2/2021 4:06:00 AM

Thank you, for noticing, and your kind comments, you may be interested in a short story I posted here the other day: https://www.poetrysoup.com/short_stories/robert_6833 all the best - Terry.