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Awake the Moon

awake the moon its madness and proclivity breaking ku-ku rules 4/23/2022

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/29/2022 6:54:00 AM

Really love lines 1 & 2 ~ I particularly love your use of 'proclivity'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2022 6:55:00 AM

Thank you! xxoo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2022 6:10:00 AM

nicely penned. ku-ku is a new one for me.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2022 8:59:00 PM

Thanks, Caren!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/25/2022 8:51:00 PM

Rules are made to be broken, they say... Oops, that's records. Hmm. ~ Grammar/Syntax/Lexicon Person

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2022 9:07:00 PM

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/25/2022 11:34:00 AM

Splendid and delighting!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2022 11:43:00 AM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Silpika Kalita

Date: 4/25/2022 2:51:00 AM

I must say Kim, I must learn senryu from you. Moon is always an enigma and you create an unique magic out of it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2022 3:39:00 AM

Thank you, Silpika!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2022 11:48:00 AM

Love this, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2022 12:06:00 PM

Thank you <3

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/24/2022 11:48:00 AM

A wonderful gem from you, Kim, and yes, you are really clever in that you defy convention.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2022 12:06:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/24/2022 2:27:00 AM

Another gem, from you Kim, yes so clever does break the rules.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2022 3:49:00 AM

Thank you, Harry!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 4/23/2022 10:47:00 PM

Great senryu. Enjoyed it. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2022 3:49:00 AM

Thank you, Victor!