Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Awake At Last - a Darren White Production

Silent nights and sleepy mornings
carry your best through our song
blown soft in the wind of change.
Heart, sweet
giving all in which you breathe
a gracious gift, freely
words of wisdom, encourage
the sombre tones of grey
beheld 
but not desired

Smiling sun,  sleepy still 
behind marshmallow clouds, 
sitting low in the sill. 
Fragrance, sweet 
perfume caresses me, 
half asleep, 
with hands gesturing
a patch of fog, shreds of memory, 
rags ripped in corners
tattered but you and I still laugh 

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Sara Ella April 24, 2017 at 7:25 PM A wonderful collaboration! :D You two make a great team <3

Christie Moses April 24, 2017 at 7:30 AM Beautiful writing :)

Jean Murray April 23, 2017 at 3:57 PM This certainly brings a smile. Encore!

White Wolf April 21, 2017 at 11:57 PM I sit here yearning for MORE!!! Haha. What a wonderful blend of pens this is! Awesome guys!

Lisa Ricci April 21, 2017 at 4:12 PM Good Evening Tim and Darren. I loved the title Awake at Last which is poetic in itself. Better still, I really loved the Darren White Production. How marvelous is that. Very. This is beautiful poetry. Individually you both Tim and Darren are truly top level poets and entries such as this confirms that. Congratulations on your collaboration. Now I give a toast to being awake and alive and specifically a toast to "Awake at Last". Thank you for posting Tim. Well done entirely. Tim Smith April 21, 2017 at 4:16 PM Cheers Lisa to being alive and awake.

Jan Allison April 21, 2017 at 3:59 PM can we see many many more productions like this guys your pens flow so beautifully together:-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith April 21, 2017 at 4:15 PM Lol...With the great lines he creates it would be easy

Nette Onclaud April 21, 2017 at 3:01 PM ohh, you both make my heart beat!..huggs Tim Smith April 21, 2017 at 4:14 PM Thanks so much nette

Charmaine Chircop April 21, 2017 at 2:57 PM A Darren Production :) Smile...You two really created a beautiful poem ..Oh WoW. Tim Smith April 21, 2017 at 4:14 PM I thought that was fun...He deserves the spotlight...I was lucky to have a little time to add to his lines

Darren White April 21, 2017 at 1:40 PM Heh, how I love what you have done with those lines! I love it, it's a beautiful poem, my friend :) Tim Smith April 21, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thanks for sending them to me. They brought me a smile Darren White April 21, 2017 at 1:59 PM A Darren White Production LOL

Chris Green April 21, 2017 at 1:40 PM What a fantastic collaboration, I loved this. Your two styles mesh wonderfully. Bravo both poets. Tim Smith April 21, 2017 at 4:10 PM Darren has an? uplifting view and I'm honored when he sends me some lines . Darren White April 21, 2017 at 2:05 PM I love the poem Tim made :) I liked to write the few lines I gave him.