Awake

I needed to feel awake before I died,
And so I did some things that made me live...
I didn't rob a bank or kill someone
I didn't drink or pour life through a sieve...
I contemplated... and came up with your bright smile
As the gift that'll keep me breathing for a while
And -- more than that, I'll keep a constant vigil
For when Hope comes and writes its fiery sigil

I'd float away on tears, if I could cry,
But instead, I'll hold the blossom in my Eye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Asuncion Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 6:33 PM
An inspiring poem, sir Andrew. Please read my new poem LUCID DAWN. Thank you, sir.
Fairchild Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Thank you, Sir Bernard! I will gladly read your poem!
Sue Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 6:00 PM
Very nice poem. I like it. Full of positivity and strength.
Fairchild Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 12:55 AM
Sometimes, positivity is all that keeps us from madness. Thank you for your kind words!
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 2:45 PM
so thoughtful and sweet!
Fairchild Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 12:54 AM
Thank you!
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February 10, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Wonderful! :)
Fairchild Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 2:04 AM
Thanks! or 'a dank'!
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