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Awake

I needed to feel awake before I died, And so I did some things that made me live... I didn't rob a bank or kill someone I didn't drink or pour life through a sieve... I contemplated... and came up with your bright smile As the gift that'll keep me breathing for a while And -- more than that, I'll keep a constant vigil For when Hope comes and writes its fiery sigil I'd float away on tears, if I could cry, But instead, I'll hold the blossom in my Eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/8/2019 6:33:00 PM
An inspiring poem, sir Andrew. Please read my new poem LUCID DAWN. Thank you, sir.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 5/8/2019 8:13:00 PM
Thank you, Sir Bernard! I will gladly read your poem!
Date: 2/14/2019 6:00:00 PM
Very nice poem. I like it. Full of positivity and strength.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/15/2019 12:55:00 AM
Sometimes, positivity is all that keeps us from madness. Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 2/11/2019 2:45:00 PM
so thoughtful and sweet!
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/15/2019 12:54:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/10/2019 10:27:00 PM
Wonderful! :)
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/11/2019 2:04:00 AM
Thanks! or 'a dank'!

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