Awake

awake the midnight hours ticking counting stars above posted on October 4, 2018

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/5/2018 5:28:00 AM

I find my eyes looking up with your fine ku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/5/2018 4:38:00 AM

I'm a night person; my most creative hours are between midnight and 6 am. I remember counting stars from childhood; now there are so few that are viewable because of lights and pollution. A very accurate pen you have here.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/5/2018 1:03:00 AM

Nothing worse than lack of sleep, gets worse as you get older too. Mind you years of working funny hours has put my body clock out of sync, yawn. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2018 9:12:00 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Tom.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/4/2018 9:55:00 PM

...and praying that 'awake' does not become 'a Wake!' ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2018 9:13:00 AM

Don't give up your day job, Gershon. LOL