Awaiting Spring

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zesty life's birth pangs trees are joyfully budding ~ to stitch spring skin shades written: March 31, 2022 checked by: howmanysyllables.com Nature in Spring Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/1/2022 1:09:00 AM

Great haiku. Best for a win.

Valsa George

Date: 3/31/2022 9:59:00 PM

Beautifully done Lasaad.... ! Love the expression-'to stitch spring skin shades'

Anselmo Boles

Date: 3/31/2022 6:09:00 PM

There is effervescence in your Haiku S.P.! A fine piece Lasaad...ab

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2022 2:09:00 PM

I think you did a great job with your metaphor!!

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/31/2022 11:36:00 AM

Nicely written Sotto, "zesty life's birth pangs" my favorite line. Best for win. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/31/2022 11:12:00 AM

Beautiful to see. We are still waiting for budding. I look forward to spring. Enjoy :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/31/2022 10:53:00 AM

The spring brings new life to our jaded landscape, Love the spring imagery Lasaad, hope your week is going well. Tom