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Awaiting Admittance Haiku

a gentle dew drop
slides softly down the petal
awaits admittance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/10/2011 3:32:00 PM
Enjoyed the verbal picture here Tahera, and congrats on the placement win..!
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:20:00 AM
A lovely, classy haiku here, Tahera. I was wondering wot the premise was, upon seeing the title. Congrats on your win~!
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:08:00 AM
Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Tahera
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 2:00:00 AM
well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff, tahera... : ) huggs
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:26:00 PM
beautiful, beautiful haiku! Love how you portrayed this dew drop :) Super enjoyed this one, Tahera, congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:33:00 PM
Tahera! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:56:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your super duper win in the Haiku contes with these glorious ones luv..
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:46:00 PM
this was so precious, Tahera. One of my favorites of the single haiku on the list! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/24/2011 4:34:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 2/16/2011 11:10:00 PM
I was expecting some sort of exam when I first read the title but I got such a pleasant surprise with this-- very pretty Tahera :)
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:33:00 PM
Wow!! to me this poem speaks of water to flower. But sings of man to a woman. This could be my favorite Haiku of all.
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Date: 2/15/2011 1:26:00 PM
Good day Tahera, how are you I hope you had a wonderful valentines,, stopping by to enjoy your haiku,,, nice,..p.d.
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:50:00 AM
so alluring and winsome and lovely, a beauty~~
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:40:00 AM
Good one..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:22:00 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```T*A*H*E*R*A M*A*N*N*A*N¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
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Date: 2/14/2011 3:55:00 PM
Ah, awesome imagery, Tahera...I can picture the sun rising warming the atmosphere and the drop sliding....Lovely Haiku. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/14/2011 1:04:00 PM
Beautifully written, Tahera. Thank you for all the kind comments you have written about my poetry. It means a great deal that you take time to let me know how you feel about my work. Best wishes to you. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:35:00 AM
Am also waiting Tahera my friend and wrote a Spring poem too but just posted my Happy Valentine's Day one first.. so enjoy your H.V.D. with lots of luv.. am inspired by your lovely Haiku ..
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:26:00 AM
This one has me smiling this morning Tahera. Very very thought provoking and imaginative and yes ..perfectly poetic... into my favs
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Date: 2/14/2011 3:25:00 AM
You haiku has a lovely image, Tahera, and also reminds me how much we all need nourishment. Beautifully stated! Love and best wishes for a happy Valentine's Day, Carolyn
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Date: 2/14/2011 2:12:00 AM
This is an awesome Haiku Tahera!So much you have captured in just three lines---enjoyed----kashinath
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Date: 2/14/2011 1:03:00 AM
incredible lines so flowing, tahera! i like lots! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:21:00 PM
Awesome, Tahera!
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:47:00 PM
A very descriptive haiku. Written very well.
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