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Avalanche

Avalanches

They have  no enemy  

Not an ounce of bloodlust

No regret

No discrimination between evening

Day

Night 

Neither the sun nor the moon


And yet they are so reckless

The nameless mountain, that frightful thing

So quick to pulverise the living

No reaction to the brooding look in the eyes of the elk

Who promptly learns that 


Sometimes

The killer does not have a weapon

Or teeth

Claws

Not even a hungry stomach that needs to be satisfied

So 


If the truth is that

A  human’s conscience

Is more complex and speculative 

Than that of an elk’s

 I could not imagine

The hopelessness that a human may feel


I think that first 

After the cuckoo of the mountain 

And the sound of peril 

comes the shock

Perhaps slight profanity

Confusion 

Analyzation 

Then realization

That nothing can be done


And that in just a few moments, 

Run as fast as you can

But

You will, in fact

Be nothing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/29/2016 1:19:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Kathryn. :)
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Date: 5/23/2016 12:47:00 AM
Kathryn Smith, FA poem-, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/23/2016 12:14:00 AM
Kathryn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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