Autumn's Wild Rooster

Gloaming is wont to quell
the ginger smoke,
expunge the crimson flames
that surround the mill.
Lilac shadows encroach 
to cloak the hull's mossy patina.
Autumn's wild rooster,
struts its brash plumage
among fallen shingles and rotted planks
until a black hawk soars,
eclipsing feral zinnias' embers
just as calliope chimes
of a fallen carousel
disappear in taloned pine air.

5/22/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/8/2019 9:59:00 PM
This beauty gave me chills Dale. I thought is was brilliant! Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/9/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thanks very much, Connie.
Date: 5/8/2019 3:58:00 PM
Your autumn wild rooster is so vivid, Dale, congratulations!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/9/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle.
Date: 2/9/2019 6:43:00 PM
I was completely captivated and enchanted by the striking beauty of your poem, Dale. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 2/9/2019 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Date: 2/5/2019 11:23:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 2/6/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 10/4/2018 3:37:00 PM
I can tell by your beautiful imagery that you dream in color Dale. Your creativity knows no bounds! Congratulations on your deserved win! : )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/4/2018 3:47:00 PM
I always appreciate your kind comments, Connie.
Date: 9/29/2018 5:24:00 PM
Gorgeous image, LOVE the rooster image. Congrats on your win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/29/2018 5:38:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Date: 9/29/2018 10:02:00 AM
Lovely imagery. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/29/2018 11:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line.
Date: 6/22/2018 8:58:00 AM
Stunning images in this beautiful painting with words. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/22/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine.
Date: 6/22/2018 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written with great imagery.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/22/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 6/18/2018 6:47:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Dale! Congrats on the win - glad I got to read this.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/18/2018 7:27:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Date: 5/23/2018 9:52:00 AM
I agree Dale, your imagery is superb. A complete vignette, Well done !!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/23/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thanks, Mike!
Date: 5/22/2018 3:52:00 PM
Indeed, you have some very creative images in your poem, Dale. The rooster has to beware the hawk, a scavenger. Enjoyed, carolyn
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/22/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 5/22/2018 3:27:00 PM
Very nice Dale. With some suspense in this too. I enjoyed this. :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/22/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Date: 5/22/2018 3:07:00 PM
You are a master of imagery my friend. so beautiful. By the way, you said my recent pantoum was only one using the form. Maybe you just did not read too many of them? that seems so weird!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/22/2018 3:50:00 PM
I confess I only read two or three, but none were pantoums! Maybe the others thought 'pantoum' was metaphorical.
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