Autumn's Wild Rooster

Gloaming is wont to quell
the ginger smoke,
expunge the crimson flames
that surround the mill.
Lilac shadows encroach 
to cloak the hull's mossy patina.
Autumn's wild rooster,
struts its brash plumage
among fallen shingles and rotted planks
until a black hawk soars,
eclipsing feral zinnias' embers
just as calliope chimes
of a fallen carousel
disappear in taloned pine air.

5/22/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 9:59 PM
This beauty gave me chills Dale. I thought is was brilliant! Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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May 9, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Thanks very much, Connie.
Faulkner Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Your autumn wild rooster is so vivid, Dale, congratulations!
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May 9, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Michelle.
Ashley Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 6:43 PM
I was completely captivated and enchanted by the striking beauty of your poem, Dale. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 11:23 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Thank you, Line.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 3:37 PM
I can tell by your beautiful imagery that you dream in color Dale. Your creativity knows no bounds! Congratulations on your deserved win! : )
Cozart Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 3:47 PM
I always appreciate your kind comments, Connie.
Krampe Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Gorgeous image, LOVE the rooster image. Congrats on your win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Lovely imagery. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Thanks so much, Line.
George   Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Stunning images in this beautiful painting with words. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine
Cozart Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Thanks, Elaine.
Gentry Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written with great imagery.
Cozart Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Krampe Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Awesome imagery, Dale! Congrats on the win - glad I got to read this.
Cozart Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Gentile Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:52 AM
I agree Dale, your imagery is superb. A complete vignette, Well done !!!
Cozart Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Thanks, Mike!
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May 22, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Indeed, you have some very creative images in your poem, Dale. The rooster has to beware the hawk, a scavenger. Enjoyed, carolyn
Cozart Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Sands Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Very nice Dale. With some suspense in this too. I enjoyed this. :)
Cozart Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:07 PM
You are a master of imagery my friend. so beautiful. By the way, you said my recent pantoum was only one using the form. Maybe you just did not read too many of them? that seems so weird!!
Cozart Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:50 PM
I confess I only read two or three, but none were pantoums! Maybe the others thought 'pantoum' was metaphorical.
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