Eve Roper Poet Dodoitsu

Autumns Trees

Autumn, your plethora of
ardent colors that spear up
then bare, becoming dormant;
stretching their branches.

10/1/2020



Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

7, 7, 7, 5 syllables

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 25, 2020 at 10:39 PM This lovely poem has such a mélange of quill colors, Eve. Your pen strokes are looking gorgeous this time of the year. Love an happy holidays.

Suzanne Delaney November 16, 2020 at 3:51 AM So beautiful, Eve: My favorite time of year. Best, SuZ

Jan Allison October 6, 2020 at 2:51 PM I adore the colours of Autumn, many congratulations on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France October 5, 2020 at 7:31 AM Eve, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 12:31 PM So beautiful Eve. Congratulations! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2020 at 11:51 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick October 2, 2020 at 11:08 AM Creative and expressive lines penned. I enjoyed reading this one today. I like the stark bare branches showing their shapes in winter. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara

Angela Crabtree October 2, 2020 at 10:40 AM It is pretty with the fall leaves on the trees. It doesn't last long, like you said. Great write! My favorite line, "stretching their branches". Trees do seem to have a mind of their own. :) Love, Angie

John Castellenas October 2, 2020 at 6:34 AM Amazing use of description. You said everything needed in so few words. A amazing poem dear Eve.

Tom Cunningham October 2, 2020 at 3:20 AM Beautiful season with all its amazing colour. A lot said in a few lines Eve. Good luck Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 3:17 AM - Lovely written, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar October 2, 2020 at 1:42 AM Well constructed Dodoitsu. I love nature scenes especially the Fall. ~~