Autumn's Still-Life

Waltz with me at autumn's end
where leaves of brown and red adrift ~ 
grandiose at the kiss of sunlight
as they return to sullen ground.

Sing with me a sweet symphony
in unison with the falls cascading~
as leaves afloat cease awhile
tickling our feet immersed therein.

Open your lips and taste the rain
as it drizzles from the crimson sky;
Whilst rainbow arcs a delicate smile
a petrichor fills our senses
with sublime savoury scents ~
for me and for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 1:33 PM
A very beautiful poem . Depths of truth and light in its verses. Closing stanza is icing on a fine cake. A fav... God bless..
Chuuk Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:00 PM
This is so beautiful, JCB. I love it!
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Great verse, JCB, I love discretions of nature. Thank you so much for my placement.
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 5:27 PM
wow i cant believe i ever missed this gem. excuse my typing. my beautiful cat who rarely comes to me is sitting in my arm si i am typing one handed
Lawrence Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 6:00 PM
Mesmerizing… beautiful poem JCB. Loved it ! Susan :)
Ligon Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Beautiful visuals, as if a painting has come to life.
Jayasankar Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Such a beautiful exquisite write dear JCB... Enjoyed reading.. Hugs... ~ Ani
Agustin Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 4:22 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Fowler Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:16 AM
Nice one JCB Congratulations on your win! :)
George Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 1:10 AM
Congratulations Jez on your great win ! Have a happy 2023.....
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I enjoyed this one very much. Have a Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
Alex Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:29 PM
It's, indeed, great work. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 5:57 PM
JCB, you set a wonderful scene. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
One Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 12:40 PM
This is a very beautiful poem.. can have a double meaning to it.. lovely imagery
Rose  Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 4:25 AM
You our my symphony today, a musical note in my repertoire of poets, I love this, Merry Christmas dear poet, stay happy and healthy all year :)
George Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 2:00 AM
It is pleasant to enjoy the rain after a dry spell ! I too love the smell of petrichor. Love your autumn scenes, dear Jez. All the Best!
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 6:22 AM
Enjoyed the joy of autumn you convey in this celebration of parting season. Best to you, JCB.
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